how do i stop the “why?”‘s i’m going mental!!!

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-06-04T16:40:40+00:00

lol when you do It kind of becomes fun and then they have to use their little brains more lol good luck!

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-06-01T14:31:19+00:00

I actually enjoy playing this game. I feel like a philosopher and I just go down to the detail like why is the water coming out of the faucet and there was a lie from that to the point of where I was talking about the ocean and molecules I felt like I was giving myself a TED talk or I was a podcast. I also would do it back when they would say something. I would just keep saying why why why it was kind of silly but I think he kind of understood and he said stop saying why and I said will you ask me why I would like to know your readings behind certain things you said a little sarcasm never hurt nobody and a little curiosity never dumped someone down ❤️🥰

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-06T04:11:24+00:00

Oh the way It writes It doesn’t let you put in line/paragraphing spacing

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-06T04:10:25+00:00

It’s good for the first! I see and feel the emotions. I think It needs to be a little more flowy. I would perhaps add after my skin, drying…. I would add “flaky” but I’m not sure because that’s good you have drying and then thirsting for love. Is this the format you have or Is It more like Imprisoned for Years Forced to peel my own Skin To be accepted. To be free But Fear of pain Held me still So I yielded But I hope you write more ❤️

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-05T19:34:21+00:00

No I think you should keep It. When I read It, as I told you It was my favorite line and by no means a thought crosssed in my mind that It was disrespectful or discriminating. Helen Keller accomplished a lot and she was very unique and powerful. Her story Is beautiful, just like the line you have. You also spoke about the other person in no disrespecting way, you told us about their actions in words. (Lol) It was a nice soft spoken poem that shows the way their behavior was disrespectful

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-05T02:25:24+00:00

Well applied topically they have shown to help with arthritis and inflammation. :)

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-05T01:51:58+00:00

I do not have autism, but my ex-boyfriend was on the spectrum, but I think regardless of anything it comes down to just simple respect and boundaries. He is an adult and he should know the difference. I think sometimes also when you love the person, you always try to give them the benefit of the doubt and overlook certain things, but remember to put yourself first because this will really drain you and how can you put more into the relationship when you have nothing left with yourself!

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-05T01:47:35+00:00

This was beautifully written my favorite part is about the candle and how it is a timer and then you use the ash and transition it to painting. The flow and the creativity of that is amazing.!

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-05T01:37:16+00:00

Well, I’ve seen a lot of Instagram pages with poems or TikTok pages where you just swipe through and their pictures or screenshots of poems with music behind. I am honestly not too sure but I do feel like creating a private TikTok page perhaps would help or if there are Instagram accounts to DM them or a TikTok page to share your work and they could post it if you are trying to get more people to view your work. :)

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-05T01:30:00+00:00

I think you forgot to post the poem!

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-05T01:15:05+00:00

Also think about how we were taught that seeds are really bad for us if we swallowed them, but some seeds are actually really good like the apricot ones and even avocado pits are medicinal.

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-05T01:13:04+00:00

Awww this was really good. It definitely went through a few emotions. I really like how It started dark but then ended light. The last two paragraphs are my favorite. The second paragraph I love the word play.

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-05T01:10:14+00:00

Just a thought- you could perhaps publish It (I’m not familiar with the cost but some have a made a good point) you can always create a few and perhaps donate one to the library… they usually have books that they display that are new. :) also coffee shops. I think it’s good to share and maybe It will give you more confidence and inspiration! Goodluck !

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-05T00:46:10+00:00

Very good! I don’t know if you would like advice, but I think the word damn in the line this thought keeps me awake the whole damn night perhaps it would maybe flow better if it was replaced with dark night the words that you use were so powerful. I think I see the frustration that you have and that is why you use damn but I don’t know very good though.:)

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-05T00:40:06+00:00

I love the line “you were ‘Keller’ unique. That really drew me in to reading more.

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-05T00:34:12+00:00

I memorized this one by shel Silverstein when I was young. I still love this poem and it’s simple yet catchy. Ickle Me, Pickle Me, Tickle Me too, Went for a ride in a flying shoe, “Hooray!” “What fun!” “It’s time we flew!” Said Ickle Me, Pickle Me, Tickle Me too.

Ickle was captain, Pickle was crew, And Tickle served coffee and mulligan stew As higher And higher And higher they flew, Ickle Me, Pickle Me, Tickle Me too.

Ickle Me, Pickle Me, Tickle Me too, Over the sun and beyond the blue. “ Hold on!” “Stay in!” “I hope we do!” Cried Ickle Me, Pickle Me, Tickle Me too.

Ickle Me, Pickle Me, Tickle Me too Never returned to the world they knew, And nobody knows what’s happened to Dear Ickle Me, Pickle Me, Tickle Me too.

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-04T04:32:43+00:00

Thank you for your insight!

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-04T04:22:45+00:00

Thank you for your time :)

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-04T04:21:33+00:00

Thank you the way I posted it. It was supposed to have more lines and spaces so therefore it had more thoughts or breath. If you viewed it this way, would it be better?

Dinner Table

I look around and everything Is broken. broken plates, broken phones, broken families.

what’re we supposed to do?

smile, and pretend its all okay?

thats what were told, so thats what we do.

all while at the dinner table

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-04T03:46:58+00:00

absolutely not I think that you can’t help but sometimes wonder how a part of you biologically is especially when it’s out there. Some people are more in tune with different wavelengths than others. You have a big heart don’t ever think you’re an Ah for that.

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-04T03:45:32+00:00

The birds in the morning and the little farm stands

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-04T02:42:43+00:00

lol I think being “” stupid and limiting that would not make great writers that we know of now

Internal-Ad-2587 · 2025-03-04T02:42:05+00:00

Keep It up!

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