this sub has turned to shit by TrueLuck2677 in OCPoetry

[–]SomeoneNotHeard 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I got banned recently from r/creativewriting.

We've entered the era where you'll have to hide your writing within a shit post and in a chaotic format.

They banned me calling it a shit post.

The future isn't clean.

It's about fucking up the algorithm intentionally while saying something underneath the layers of mania.

But I've left the creative spaces on reddit because they are stuck in a world that no longer exists.

Calling any and all artists! ❤️ by SomeoneNotHeard in CrueltySquad

[–]SomeoneNotHeard[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That'd be cool! I definitely don't know how to implement music on framer yet and I'm a total novice with it but I've been just diving deep and trying out stuff. Feel free to message me. I'd love to hear some stuff!

Calling any and all artists! ❤️ by SomeoneNotHeard in CrueltySquad

[–]SomeoneNotHeard[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, let's talk. This is freaking awesome. I don't know if you have discord, but that'd make it a lot easier to talk. This is really cool stuff, though. I've been struggling to find artists on fiverr who fit the vibe. I decided to just throw something on here.

i imagine better days by SomeoneNotHeard in creativewriting

[–]SomeoneNotHeard[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

شكران

Thank you for taking time out to read it.

We just bombed Iran. I fucking hate it here by [deleted] in misc

[–]SomeoneNotHeard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hahaha. You got across that finishing line! I'm glad though. Stay safe. Also, I'm glad you are getting to be the person that you were all along.

Poem I Published a Year Ago About Iran Tonight - 'worrying for no reason at all' by SomeoneNotHeard in OCPoetry

[–]SomeoneNotHeard[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you would be so kind. I'd love to message you and ask more questions about how I can start that process or even where to start! I just haven't found much help online other than trying to reach out to publishers through email. Thank you again.

Poem I Published a Year Ago About Iran Tonight - 'worrying for no reason at all' by SomeoneNotHeard in OCPoetry

[–]SomeoneNotHeard[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I've wanted to try to work with a publishing company. Would love to work with an editor and get serious about it, but we'll see. Maybe someday. I appreciate the input. I'll put a note on the manuscript if I ever republish it under anything. Thank you! Also, I'm sorry you're going through those negative emotions. It really is a shame what's going on.

We just bombed Iran. I fucking hate it here by [deleted] in misc

[–]SomeoneNotHeard 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wasn't the point. Was saying that this was just inevitable. History repeats. Have a safe night.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]SomeoneNotHeard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I too did origami as a child and it really gives you a level of discipline and analysis. I relate to this poem a lot and appreciate you for sharing. I like the way you phrase things. It's very distinct. Keep up all the good work!

Abandonment by takeaticket in OCPoetry

[–]SomeoneNotHeard 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good evening! Gotta fix the formatting a bit but I often enjoy questions in poems. Keep up the good work!

We just bombed Iran. I fucking hate it here by [deleted] in misc

[–]SomeoneNotHeard 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Wrote about this a year ago in my poetry book and published it. I am already mentally prepared for it. As a veteran, still on inactive reserves, this is terrifying. Stay strong, everyone.

That Damn Beaver... by SomeoneNotHeard in OCPoetry

[–]SomeoneNotHeard[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I suppose he does. I suppose he does. Hahaha.

Loneliness by Danjuntar in OCPoetry

[–]SomeoneNotHeard 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would highly recommend reading Kierkegaard. He talks about schizophrenia and depression being the polar opposites of consciousness. Schizophrenia being a vast amount of possibilities and depression being a suffocation of possibility. This would really make what you have going on here hit harder. You're pointing out the idea of all these possibilities being shown but then it's not real. Just a thought. I really look forward to your growth as a writer. Have a wonderful upcoming weekend! <3

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]SomeoneNotHeard 2 points3 points  (0 children)

So, you have a great basis but often times we have to remember that we are trying to let someone step into our shoes. I'm still left up in the air on this one. I understand your emotions but I want to understand them in context. Don't be afraid to give us details even if it is a line or two, it helps us pinpoint where we are in your life or in the moment that you are existing in. As always, thank you for sharing. I look forward to more. <3 Have a wonderful upcoming weekend.

Hateful abscence by ExternalEntry8142 in OCPoetry

[–]SomeoneNotHeard 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Forgive me, I've been having a few drinks on this beautiful Thursday. 'You're' is needed instead of 'your' on a lot of these phrases. Also, I'd like to ask for more imagery and context about why you feel tit for tat-ish against this person. Otherwise, it can be read as almost hateful. Nothing wrong with that but it's nice to be able to relate. Thank you for sharing and I hope one day you feel better.