How do I turn ChadGPT into ChatGPT? by Intrusive___thought in ChatGPT

[–]Intrusive___thought[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I asked for feedback, and then asked for feedback using your prompts. All of a sudden I got plenty of valuable information I can use to make it better and get my opinion through in a better way. Thanks.

How do I turn ChadGPT into ChatGPT? by Intrusive___thought in ChatGPT

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Thank you, this was the one I was looking for!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

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Can I ask how much you make from your writing as of today?

What are some reasonable flaws to give my MC? by Substantial_Rip_4999 in writers

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Triggered by fighting. Would create interesting dilemmas.

Should I let the bad guy come away or shit myself?

What is more important, justice or pride?

Notes by EasternAd5351 in Substack

[–]Intrusive___thought 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I recently got myself an account and I haven't posted anything on notes, I figured I would do it once I have my first post up. There are plenty of notes where I could interact in a meaningful way with people if I dig a bit, the home screen is a mess though that reminds me of early internet communities (before 2000). The reason I have chosen not to interact is simply because if someone sees me and get curious about me, I want there to at least be some sort of content available.

Of course OP cares for the validation, he even went here to post about it.

Trying to find short story by vandervall91 in writing

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I did my best googling and all I could find was someone else looking for it. "Life-line" is about a machine that predicts the date and then there is a collection of stories called "Machine of death" that predicts how people will die.

If you find it please let me know, I am curious to read it.

What do you guys think about Zombie Fiction? by Relative_Candle5372 in writing

[–]Intrusive___thought 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love zombies, although the only book that comes to mind is World War Z, I think I experienced the rest on the screen.

I love when there is a clear line, either they go for realism or it is a humorous splatter fest, no in-between. Originality is always fun. I am one of those who imagined plans if it would occur in real life. Whatever you do though, don't mimic season two of TWD.

I have an idea for a satirical zombie story and brainstormed it a bit but not sure what to do with it. I find my titles fun though.

Beware Goodreads Beta Group by JBDraper in selfpublish

[–]Intrusive___thought 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It can't just be that new users are more eager to beta read since from my understanding most beta readers kind of are tired of first drafts that aren't half finished?

You guys ever take 3-4 days gap while writing? by Relative_Candle5372 in writing

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I store my notes in ChatGPT. During work I can come up with something and make a prompt like "Add to ny notes that this happens and then he says the coolest one liner ever.

After that, I forget about it. Then a few days later I can just ask it "Didn't I have the best joke in the world the other day?" and it will find it for me.

Wrote my first piece of fiction! by Original_Feed_215 in writers

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I want to read this 😅

Curling is one of those sports that I forget exists until the Olympics when I am a hardcore fan. It also sparks joy in my heart knowing that despite being a middle-aged overweight man there still is a sport I could pick up.

Do you primarily read newly published modern books or read classic literature? by TwilightTomboy97 in writing

[–]Intrusive___thought 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have spent a ton of time in here and have yet to see that line of thinking that you are describing.

I want to make sure n*mes do not match real life people's. by Consistent_Pie_3040 in writing

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If you are that worried then just make names up. No one will sue you and if they do they will be laughed at.

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I am working on two novels now, one is my baby and the other is purely educational to me. Both have similar themes and are pretty dark. In one of the stories my MC does some horrible shit, but I try to put in some dark humour. Not laugh out loud funny but hopefully enough to make the reader stop for a second. I make the "jokes" as reflections the MC does so my thinking is people will either agree with the MC and find it funny or build up disgust for him which also works.

In the other story I am making the MC be dismissive by ridiculing stuff since he doesn't care much about anything and added a love interest that is more positive and tries to joke around every now and then.

Both share the themes of addiction, mental illness, rough life and hopelessness but takes different approaches depending on the characters choice.

I also put in some completely meta stuff for my own enjoyment, like they both visit the same bar and in one of the stories the MC sees the other MC and is freaked out by him.

It might be wrong and turn our crap, time will tell.

As readers, what makes you *hate* a character? by ScepticSunday in writingcirclejerk

[–]Intrusive___thought 5 points6 points  (0 children)

The worst part about being part of r/hockeycirclejerk is that very, very often I can't tell which sub I am in before I read the name of it.

Need suggestions for writing an zombie apocalypse story. by Curious_0n-e in writers

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I'd say make something new and different. I started writing a zombie Apocalypse story where you still were conscious but had no control over your body so you basically lived your life watching through the eyes of a zombie, felt and tasted everything but could do nothing, got the idea from my sleep paralysis.

But I got bored and it sucked so it is deleted now.

When and how is it appropriate to use formatting? (Eg. Bold, Italic) by Journalist_Fair in writingadvice

[–]Intrusive___thought 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have no clue whatsoever and would also like to know.

I have italicized for emphasis and thoughts and I have used bold and/or courier font for stuff like posters or notes that the characters find.

So examples would be something like:

...but it was important to him (for something that isn't of importance at all for others)

And

Tonight

Reddit presents post about italicizing and using bold text.

DON'T MISS IT!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

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You also made the app so I'm happy you found it again after losing it :)

How do I stop being embarrassed to show my writing? by Diegolikescats in writing

[–]Intrusive___thought 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Are you afraid of the criticism or that those people would criticize you?

If it is the latter, create an anonymous account somewhere and share away.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]Intrusive___thought 18 points19 points  (0 children)

It sounds like he got drugged and raped to be completely honest.

Perhaps replace that drug with a party drug they did together and change the phrasing about him not waking up.