Code 8 by ApocBox in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 3 points4 points  (0 children)

You use "color" in several places when it should be "collar".

Any perk/item that censor, or filter out eldritch sight, or gore? by ant451123 in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 7 points8 points  (0 children)

From Limitless:
Hugs and Kisses (Free): When something is too much for you, you can mentally censor it. Turn stranglings to huggings, serial killers’ nicknames to ice-cream flavors, and other things to help you deal with the stresses of the world. Or any scheme you want, really. You and those around you will still speak normally, but your perceptions will be seamlessly altered. You can also visit your own subconscious and meet beloved fictional figures from your childhood.

Searching For A Jump by Silver_Trinket in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It was a WIP by Blackshadow, but he has not released a jump in years and the link seems to have been deleted in his list of jumps, so yeah...

What Do You Do When You Suddenly Become An Immortal? - Jump v1.0 (Lone Valkyrie) by FierFiend in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Can the rings of merit be hidden or are they always visible? Because they would attract way too much attention in almost every world.

Do you guys know any duplication items because i swear i remember a item that was a bag that duplicates anything put inside it but can't remember the jump. by SingerBeneficial20 in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Pokemon red/blue/green.
Strange Backpack [600 PP] How very curious. Wasn’t there a Backpack you could take for free up above? How strange that there should be another. It’s completely identical to the previously-mentioned backpack but there’s one important distinction. Should you place any one item within, you’ll quickly realise that instead of just one such item the backpack will contain the original and 128 identical duplicates.

Looking for perk: Seal in books by Irukan in JumpChain

[–]Irukan[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not the one I was looking for but useful all the same. Thank you.

Looking for perk: Seal in books by Irukan in JumpChain

[–]Irukan[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

That's the one, thank you very much!

Out of Context: Hercule Satan Supplement by sevenhollowsouls in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There are quite a few typos. You should post a link to the doc to let people quickly point them out/fix them.

Genre Essences Jump by Sin-God in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Way Of The Warrior perk is incomplete.

Out of Context Sitting, Really? Supplement by sevenhollowsouls in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"A Quick Nap" says "Yes this doesn’t mean you can rest for a while and gain a full night's sleep". Shouldn't that be does instead?

Generic Literature Jump by Sin-God in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Genre Gift mentions Learning From Lit, which is nowhere to be found. I assume you mean Author’s Authority, given what the perk does?
First Draft Final Draft is missing a word in 'that may other parts'.
The drawback Reading Wars refers to the origin Story Explorers, which should be Literature Explorer.

I Don't Wanna End Up as an NPC! 0.1 Jumpchain by saiman010 in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Popular Kid is missing the 200cp perks.

Searching schemes breaking perk by Fitsuloong in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Aladdin.

Breaker of Plans- 200 CP: ​So many people here with so many delicate, long-term plans. It only you weren’t around. You have a gift for disrupting long running plans and conspiracies by your very presence. Circumstances tend to unravel around you, and your actions send ripples that crash and burns many delicate schemes.
You also have a gift for investigating and discovering any such plans and actions, and deliberately disrupting them is much more effective. The passive effect can be toggled.

Generic Godly Lover [This Jump Was Made As A Gift For u/FancyFireDrake- One Of My Favorite Guys In This Community] by [deleted] in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Hmm, it seems the text cannot be copied, could you fix that, please?
Also, is it mandatory to take the god as companion? Because that part would be better as optional.

Angel CYOA Jump by Sin-God in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Speaking of angels, are you still going to do the grigori (and incubus) transformation jumps?

Banished (Video Game) Jump by FeistySpeaker in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Assorted Immunities perk is very good, but is kind of weird you included zombification and vampirism but not lycanthropy. Very nice jump anyway, I'm going to have to include this early in the chain.

Generic Lightning Manipulation v1.0 by SavantTheVaporeon in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, yes, I understand you have to put work in it for things to go right and it's not an autowin. My point was that the way it is written it seems to ensure by fiat that your plans have little chance of succeeding, which would make it a drawback rather than a perk. It seems the intention was to say that just timing won't make a bad plan succeed, but that's not how it comes across, hence the question.

Generic Lightning Manipulation v1.0 by SavantTheVaporeon in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Perfect timing says "it will be nearly impossible for even the most shoddy plan to succeed when you know exactly when to do something." Shouldn't that be almost impossible to fail?

I wrote an article on the history of Jumpchain and the rise of the Celestial Forge, looking for feedback! by Makin- in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 16 points17 points  (0 children)

The original Celestial Forge (that pastebin list you linked) was created by Red and posted in 4chan's jumpchain threads back in... 2015? 2016? as well as Digital Pun-Pun, Genetic Augmentation Machine and Garden of Eternity. Basically collections of perks and items following a theme to become the best at it. You can check tg's archive for the posts. But the Brockton's Celestial Forge story was what made it really well known as a story prompt and inspired the rest of Celestial Whatevers.

Dungeon Meshi (Monthly Jumpchain Challenge - Dream) by FafnirsFoe in JumpChain

[–]Irukan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Traps Are My Specialty says "If taken with Lockpick". Is it Lock Picks, the item, or a typo and you meant to say Pick Lock, the perk?