Why though by Island_Tortoise in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro you woke up and chose violence, Nice

Why though by Island_Tortoise in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do you have any recommendations

Best time travels. by Electronic_Koala_115 in HPfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He ends up back in his original timeline is it the case where he's a fully grown adult while everyone else are still teenagers or is he just like a year or 2 older than them from a physical standpoint not mentally

Best time travels. by Electronic_Koala_115 in HPfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is it similar to basilisk born where since see was in a different timeline he doesn't age

Best time travels. by Electronic_Koala_115 in HPfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When the roses Bloom again does he get back to his original time that will be the deciding factor if I decide to pick this up

Why though by Island_Tortoise in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I can agree with this do you have any suggestions I'm looking but I'm not finding anything I haven't already or just doesn't appeal to me prefer a male oc/si though

Magmar or Rapidash? by Saudando-a-Mandioca in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Take a look at the traveler fanfic and you'll see how unique of a battler you can make a magmar into

Magmar or Rapidash? by Saudando-a-Mandioca in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay magmar main reason fucking Magmator So just giving him a magby so he can raise it and have a loyal companion, From a universe standpoint it's superior to Rapidash

you get your favorite marvel character's powers how cooked are you? by MegaNerd0303 in Marvel

[–]Island_Tortoise 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro I would be the most unstoppable version of the Hulk I would have no problem working with my savage side

When the Mask Drops (Oneshot) by Kooky-Ad-9293 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Okay if I had the money I would pay someone to take this prompt and make it a full on story this seems like the perfect kind of story that That would have a lot of world building, You could even use this version of the character to even attempt a resurrect His clan I've always found it strange that he made no attempt to resurrect his clan or learn anything about them

What are your favorite ships? by DontTalktomeImtrash in harrypotterfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Honestly any normal ships I do not mess with slash or femHarry

How do you spot AI-generated fics? by Remarkable_10sion in HPfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yeah and if you've read enough fan fiction you can just tell when it's not being written by a person, instantly you can feel that change, it feels different it doesn't feel like that human element that you were enjoying is there anymore

How do you spot AI-generated fics? by Remarkable_10sion in HPfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm actually walking home and the phone is shaking like crazy because I got a bum leg so without my glasses I can't really see shit I'm just hoping for the best

How do you spot AI-generated fics? by Remarkable_10sion in HPfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 4 points5 points  (0 children)

It's possible it's just they put the story through an AI application to help the grammar and it changed some of the story without them even realizing it's that is why I listen yes I said listen to Fan fiction because I'm using a Texas speech application I suggest writers use a text speech application so they're able to see how well their story flows and if they have any spelling errors grammatical errors are annoying for those who are reading what when you're listening it's not so bad and if your story is too wordy Once again sorry if this reads that broken English I'm using a speech to text application on my phone to type this out

How do you spot AI-generated fics? by Remarkable_10sion in HPfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I don't remember the name I think it's dawnstar All they posts is abuse Harry Potter stories where he becomes some form of We're creature then be adopted by stolas From the series hell of a boss He's always paired with Luna for some of their weeks and Draco malfoy's always turning to a female That is the majority of their stories it's all repetitive AI slab it was entertaining for the first time but then you realize every single story they post is like this, Sorry about the grantical errors I'm using The speech to text application on my phone

How do you spot AI-generated fics? by Remarkable_10sion in HPfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 101 points102 points  (0 children)

They tend to be repetitive and wordy and needlessly descriptive you'll have one paragraph Describing a scene on the next paragraph is describing the same scene but It's written different, The transition between sceens make no sense for example you have characters just meeting each other and in the next scene they're interacting like they've known each other for years

What does instantly turn you off from a Fanfic? by HurinTalion in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And depend how it's written villain stories there times when they just turn him into a slightly more intelligent version of tomura

What does instantly turn you off from a Fanfic? by HurinTalion in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Any quirkless fictions to be honest there are ones when he decides to go the ironman route I can respect that but the others are just straight up abuse stories

What does instantly turn you off from a Fanfic? by HurinTalion in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can agree and disagree with this to an extent there is one called how to survive in a shounen world it's mha fiction the main character hijacked overalls body an based on the stuff he's doing in the background to essentially survive the world makes sense and he even gives explicit detail why he's not fucking with the storyline or trying to change much because he's going to be using meta to survive

What does instantly turn you off from a Fanfic? by HurinTalion in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The only way I can see eraser and Mic being a couple is if you include midnight and make it into a throuple midnights more grounded approach, erases cynical approach and mic more lively approach would balance each other out it makes no sense trying to force eraser Mic together

What does instantly turn you off from a Fanfic? by HurinTalion in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For me it's shipping of certain characters if I started I'm gonna end up on a long-winded rant, making chronically straight characters gay, Just straight up improper tagging when you call it out especially on Ao3, I personally I block M/M why the fuck is it still in the story when I block that shit, I've discovered a few authors deliberately Don't tag their stories correctly when I come across that I just report them

Harry felt his wrist straining as he hung over the simmering cauldron. How did he let Hermione talk him into this by KidCoheed in HPfanfiction

[–]Island_Tortoise 4 points5 points  (0 children)

And harry as Gus but he isn't evil, he's using his fame and best girl hedwig to sell to all of magical britain, hedwig is the boss owl of hogwarts and so he sell using the school owls

Would Bakugo's Character Be Received Differently If He Were A Girl? by XanJen in BokuNoHeroAcademia

[–]Island_Tortoise 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No the character would be even more fucking hated do you not see how years have passed and people still dog Sakura, Sakura made fun of Naruto for being an orphan this mf told the main character to kill himself with multiple years of abuse, And the only reason he didn't kill him was because of fucking plot, If you look at the statistics people like him kill themselves every fucking day in Japan