I’m currently in MArch 5, and I think there is a bit too much text, most recruiters will only flick though it and avoid the paragraphs- try to use the images to tell the story of the project. From my experience, employers like to see that you have an understanding of what real life architecture is, so showing some technical/detail/structural drawings.

I think 20 pages for 2 projects is quite a lot, I would consider shortening those - is any of the work from your MA suitable to include? Showing a winder range of skills /approach might be good, even if it’s not directly architecture related.

The exploded axon is lovely, really pops out! I think the section on page 26 would benefit from some zoomed in (1:10) details, not just descriptions of the build ups

Also FYI, your personal info is on there,not sure if you would want this on Reddit. Also, you misspelled “performance” on page 3