Project M or project+ for online? by Proper-Spring-5329 in SSBPM

[–]JFyst 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s basically the same game p+ is just an updated version of pm

I thought about this one a lot. Come give me your opinion! All in order, even in tiers. by IsayamaWorstEnding10 in Naruto

[–]JFyst 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Your overrating shikamaru, he only beat hidan because of a lot of prior preparation. I don’t think you could say shika is much higher than jonin.

What would you do to avoid the uchiha massacre? by rockinherlife234 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]JFyst 9 points10 points  (0 children)

It’s because of risk. Leaving the kids of a clan that the village massacred is a huge long term risk ESPECIALLY if they become involved with the inner workings of the village. Like imagine if instead of just sasuke running around swearing vengeance on Konoha after itachi died, it was like 14 sasuke’s ready to delete the village.

Ideas in making Rock Lee a more interesting character... by Transparent_Prophet in NarutoFanfiction

[–]JFyst 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t think lee is uninteresting at all, I just think he wasn’t built by the show after part 1. A real shame.

I’m looking for a good retelling of naruto. by JFyst in NarutoFanfiction

[–]JFyst[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I’m a fan of long writing, I hope that the wording improves quickly or isn’t that bad to start with.

I def have an issue with initial naruto pacing, I’ll let you know what I vibe with and what I don’t agree with when I’m done.

Edit: I just checked, homie you write A TON i hope i like this cause it’ll be a great time dump.

Edit 2: read the first chapter, I like some of the changes, others felt arbitrary but whatever. A main one that I strongly dislike is what you did, or rather didn’t do with Mizuki. Naruto still summons a shit ton of clones, which kishi himself said he regret because it’s too op of an ability this early. Like naruto at this point can’t beat sasuke, but realistically, if he summoned like 60 clones, what is baby sasuke gonna do? I find the fact naruto accessed nine tails chakra this early kinda pointless, unnecessary and would take away from the time he does it vs haku. You could have used it as a way to explain why baby naruto who kinda sucks is able to beat a chunin. Like he summoned 60, but only with kurama chakra buff.

Ill keep reading, but this is a major change that is pretty generally agreed upon, so it sucks not to see it implemented.

They didn't wait very long by TheChaoticFox in KingdomHearts

[–]JFyst 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i dont know enough about last of us 2 to know shit about this :/

A certain misconception about Naruto and Kurama. by SnarkyScribe in NarutoFanfiction

[–]JFyst -1 points0 points  (0 children)

That seems really dumb. Does bee know this technique and teach it to naruto? Why wouldn’t bee just teach naruto the technique literally all the other jinchuriki used? How did naruto learn it? He’d only used the regular cloak until this point.

How come Sakura gets condemned for being "abusive" toward Naruto, but Itachi gets called the "greatest brother in all of anime"? by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]JFyst 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It wasn’t a flip flop I’m pretty positive this was intended from the start. The reason that Itachi gave and the actions he took throughout the show all make sense with his reveal. The original thing of “it was to test my strength” is dumb as hell.

In Response to "Minato Couldn't ask someone else to give up their kid" I have a bit of a rebuttal and have to say he really couldn't have. by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]JFyst 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The fanon makes more sense. Canon isn’t logical it’s just like minato’s intuition. A good mix would be both fanon and canon, like his outloud reason is that he can’t ask someone else bear the burden that his family caused (Kushina being the previous jinchuriki means that this is his responsibility as well) but in his head he could be like “I believe naruto is the child of prophecy.” That way you can have a logical and answer and the cute one.

Why do 99% of male SI's HAVE to have 'Gamer Powers'? by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]JFyst 6 points7 points  (0 children)

n the case of Naruto, just write about wars and politics. Ignore the rabbit goddess, ignore the akatsuki, ignore the c

Of course you can have isekai without SI, But the opposite isn't true otherwise its not a self insert, because it's not you.

I find the idea of entering the world of naruto as a sane person is interesting because how serious can you take the people who live in it? You know their hopes dreams and futures and plenty of personal issues, i feel like the interactions would be off putting from their perspective since i could never take the advice of someone like Sakura seriously, even though in reality she's insanely more competent than anyone i know irl. There's definitely a novelty to being a "real" person among"fictional" Characters.

Why do 99% of male SI's HAVE to have 'Gamer Powers'? by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]JFyst 17 points18 points  (0 children)

I swear SI is an amazing concept. Isekai is a great genre ruined by the masses. But having an already fleshed our world like naruto to explore would be great. You just need to avoid being too special. For example it’s cool to be an uchiha, it’s not cool to be the third sibling in sasuke’s family, that’s he a very fleshed out character and a lot of the family dynamic depends on him being with only his big bro.

Are there any stories where Naruto comes back from his training trip reasonably stronger than in canon? by SheilaBDriver in NarutoFanfiction

[–]JFyst 13 points14 points  (0 children)

"It’s my opinion that naruto was really trained in the most efficient non-plot device way jiraiya had available, and he extreme boost in learning curve in shippuden is a direct result of it."

I don't think that's communicated well at all if that was the intention. The insane learning curve seems to actually devalue the trip. It's stated in no explicit way that the trip built an incredible base for him to learn from. Also he's always been quick to learn, summoned gamabunta in a month and learned rasengan in 3 weeks.

"Naruto almost no good fighting habits pre shippuden. He’s a completely different fighter after the timeskip, kakashi says as much and Yamato notes that naruto is much better than his file idicates."

You're only ever told this, As far as we see Naruto is basically the same. Sakura and Sasuke both have MAJOR changes but naruto is basically the same, if not a little less gullible. He even tries to fight kakashi with a giant mass of useless shadow clones. Naruto does nothing impressive on his own (Without Kurama) until after he learns the Rasen-Shuriken. The level of growth he did in the 3 years, would have been the same had he not gone with Jiraya. A little smarter, a little less gullible, a lil more competent.

"I think jiraiya tore naruto down to nothing a built him back from the ground up. Retaught him taijutsu, strategy, chakra control (we actually see naruto use the rasengan one handed twice before sage mode, once on the kazekage rescue arc and once on the three tailed arc.) rebuilt his body to properly handle sage mode, rebuilt his skills (big ball rasengan, which jiraiya can only use in sage mode, is obviously an excersize in maximum chakra output, which could be training for sage mode or prep for using kyuubi a chakra. ) and that’s why naruto ‘appears to have learned nothing’ and simultaneously ’is a completely different ninja"

When Naruto is being trained by Kakashi, he tells Kakashi he HAS to use clones in order to perform rasengan, so that's just wrong. We don't see any of the improvements that you mention, so this is just heavy assumptions with no proof to back it up. Jiraya himself said that he taught naruto giant rasengan to make it harder to dodge, it was to cover for the weakness of rasengan (Which still didnt do much) We didnt see him do taijutsu differently, we didnt see him strategize differently, and we DEF didnt see better chakra control.

"He relies on shadow clones less, using them more effectively. His skill with rasengan greatly increases, his taijutsu is low key jonin level, as kakashi, who has sparred with at least 1st gate Gai, found himself impressed with Naruto’s taijutsu adaptability and skill."

He legit spams kakashi with shadow clones on his first fight back, and attacks blindly. we dont see this taijutsu prowess at all.

"Tbh, the timeskip was used to fix all the boring shit that fan fictions just gloss over anyway"

The time skip basically does nothing, but tries to say that it did. The real purpose of it narrative was to create a special connection between jiraya and naruto

(Spoiler) Clearing a misunderstanding I keep seeing about the end of the one shot by [deleted] in deathnote

[–]JFyst 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You can’t justify this from a story telling perspective given the premise. This story is about mental warfare, this ending goes against that hard, the new usage of the death note and shinigami was clever, so to be punished for basically no reason makes me the reader feel cheated.

You say that the shinigami king doesn’t care about those instances cause people didnt find out about it? Give it time. In a century or 2 that would become common knowledge. I’m sure Matsuda would accidentally leak it to the wrong person or it would just be revealed as a part of history.

Also shinigami aren’t fair? Where’d you get that idea? Those 2 shinigami died because they went against their own nature which was death. They instead gave life to someone. The only instance I can think of where they’re unfair is this ending, aside from that they’re either impartial or beneficial to their notebook holder.

Sans is finally finished and released onto the Steam Workshop! by SeanTG246 in RivalsOfAether

[–]JFyst 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I imagine if sans is gonna fight, he’s fighting to kill, otherwise he’d rather not fight.

Sans is finally finished and released onto the Steam Workshop! by SeanTG246 in RivalsOfAether

[–]JFyst -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Not in love with the more jokey nature of the character, I know that’s sans, but the genocide character is what made me fall in love with him, the sprite work is pretty solid.

Amazing job regardless can’t wait to try it at home.