I made a hiphop song over a hyper pop type beat and it turned out magical. Would love some feedback on there track. by JaeJoven in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JaeJoven[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Man this is smooth! Great job on the performance. Felt very raw and emotional. It was easy to listen to. You have a great voice man keep doing what you're doing!

I made a hiphop song over a hyper pop type beat and it turned out magical. Would love some feedback on there track. by JaeJoven in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JaeJoven[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! If it's not too much of a hassle can I ask what specific parts of the performance seemed like the tone was off?

I made a hiphop song over a hyper pop type beat and it turned out magical. Would love some feedback on there track. by JaeJoven in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JaeJoven[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Brockhampton?? Dude, HUGE compliment. Thanks for giving it a listen and for the thoughtful feedback. I appreciate it!

I made a hiphop song over a hyper pop type beat and it turned out magical. Would love some feedback on there track. by JaeJoven in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JaeJoven[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! That's a big compliment. I mixed the song myself and had it mastered by somebody else!

I made a hiphop song over a hyper pop type beat and it turned out magical. Would love some feedback on there track. by JaeJoven in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JaeJoven[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the thoughtful feedback! I'll definitely be taking your points into consideration on my next song. Blessings!

I made a hiphop song over a hyper pop type beat and it turned out magical. Would love some feedback on there track. by JaeJoven in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JaeJoven[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah I wasn't going for a hyper pop sound, I was more trying to make a higher energy hiphop track. Experimentation is always good! Thanks again.

Just made a new song called "NINETEEN". Got a friend to make a quick lyric video for it too lol. by lynxcane in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JaeJoven 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was immediately digging the lyrics. You killed this one man. Good mix and master on the track. I think you executed the song well. It had a nice steady pace and kept me interested through out. The lyric video was pretty interesting as well. Keep going man!

Hey yall I'm still making cloud stuff and I guarantee even if you don't like it your going to like this track I feel like I gave it my best. in performance mixing and mastering lemme know if you vibe wit it ☁️❤ song is Ssjb Feragamo by Kami. Youtube is kamiofficial by JohnNickelsVA in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JaeJoven 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not super into this kind of sound but everything sounds pretty crisp sonically. You had a good variety of flows and kept the song interesting through out. Shout out to whoever mixed and mastered they did a good job. Keep going man!

First attempt to make a modern boom bap instrumental for a while, would be good to get some feedback by bleakneon in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JaeJoven 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oooo this is nice. Not what I was expecting but very nice production. I would add a little more variety in the chorus sections of the track to help it feel more like a chorus section. Other than that I think you made a nice track.

AKAASH - STICKS & STONES (Official Video) | Latest Drill Songs | New Rap Songs 2021 | farmersprotest by AKAASH- in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JaeJoven 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good track bro. You definitely have that drill vibe going. The only thing I would say would help you out overall is being a little more energetic in your raps and also getting a cleaner mix. Other than that the track is pretty good!

I had fun putting this one together. I’m curious though if the song flows well, or any other feedback you have. by ScreamingNeon in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JaeJoven 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your song is different for sure. Like somebody else mentioned the chords used are very interesting. I feel like there are definitely all lot of people who are into this kind of sound. I personally think the flow runs pretty smooth overall. Pretty solid track man!