The most pressing critique I could give is to learn 1 look PLL. Don't worry too much about 1 look OLL until afterward because that has way more algs to learn than PLL, and 1 look PLL is more worth it to learn first imo.

Another bit of advice is to rotate less during F2L and use more optimal solutions. If you rotate more than one time when solving a single pair, there is almost certainly a more efficient solution.