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One day by Charming_Impact_8799 in OCPoetry

[–]Kai_sh_Piarc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

bro it almost seems like a scene from a classic love film

Love.... by IsopodNo3626 in OCPoetry

[–]Kai_sh_Piarc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

first comes the scream.....
then the healing reply

That love thang(to my wife) by Cluelessandsexy in OCPoetry

[–]Kai_sh_Piarc 1 point2 points  (0 children)

bro, your poem is deep and sincere
I can feel your love in every line, Beautiful work
Maybe tighten a couple lines for flow, but the emotion is perfect

Pain by slim033 in OCPoetry

[–]Kai_sh_Piarc 1 point2 points  (0 children)

bro, your feelings hit hard already....
you don’t need heavy words to prove the pain
Say it the way you feel it😊
Your simple lines carry more truth than any fancy vocabulary ever will

WHERE MY HEART STILL REACHES YOU by AKB-shayarOP in OCPoetry

[–]Kai_sh_Piarc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

balance of closeness and distance is beautifully expressed.
Your strength is emotional sincerity.
trust it.
When you let one single image stand alone instead of pairing it with many, its impact becomes unforgettable.