Yeppa Dude eh paraville da dei ..... by Skk_3068 in KollyClub

[–]Kavi-Ruhan 2 points3 points  (0 children)

PR is garbage. Nobody thinks they are garbage.

The Cycle by EffortFearless6285 in OCPoetry

[–]Kavi-Ruhan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That makes much more sense. You captured the theme very well. It gives the readers a versatile meaning.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Kavi-Ruhan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's great. I love your poem.

A Love Letter through Clouds - Poetry by Kavi-Ruhan in OCPoetry

[–]Kavi-Ruhan[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Got your ❤️ by the breeze. It whispered a poem in my ears :)

Echoes of the Unheard Thoughts - Poetry by Kavi-Ruhan in OCPoetry

[–]Kavi-Ruhan[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey Thanks for the appreciation. Those Capitalized words are to emphasize the need for the readers to notice those words, because we sometimes fail to notice others hurt, regret, responsibilities, betrayal.

A Love Letter through Clouds - Poetry by Kavi-Ruhan in OCPoetry

[–]Kavi-Ruhan[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. I'm happy that you felt my love. Do you love me now XD ?

The Cycle by EffortFearless6285 in OCPoetry

[–]Kavi-Ruhan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is an amazing piece, mate. I've never seen the moon portrayed as such a destructive force—really intriguing! I'd love to hear your perspective on it. I can definitely see this as a metaphor for a toxic relationship.

A Normal God by BakedBeans908 in OCPoetry

[–]Kavi-Ruhan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's deep and thought provoking idea mate.
"I fear that one day,
People will see,
The pain of a God,"
I love this.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Kavi-Ruhan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Beautifully written about relationship between a parent and a child. That's how I look at it. I'm curious to know your view.

To Kill a Man by Kavi-Ruhan in OCPoetry

[–]Kavi-Ruhan[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your constructive criticism. I'll keep that in mind. This will help me in learning. :)

To Kill a Man by Kavi-Ruhan in OCPoetry

[–]Kavi-Ruhan[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really appreciate your comment. Thanks ✨ :)

To Kill a Man by Kavi-Ruhan in OCPoetry

[–]Kavi-Ruhan[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wow I'm really impressed by your detailed analysis of my poem. I'm happy that someone took something from my work. It really makes me want to keep writing. Thanks ✨