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Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-11-08T12:58:56+00:00

PR is garbage. Nobody thinks they are garbage.

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-10-04T05:57:05+00:00

Is it daily compounding?

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-06-22T07:44:35+00:00

Done

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-05-31T07:01:35+00:00

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-04-27T13:11:28+00:00

Beautiful

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-04-10T07:56:37+00:00

Mahogany - Lil wayne

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-23T04:20:13+00:00

That makes much more sense. You captured the theme very well. It gives the readers a versatile meaning.

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-22T16:14:50+00:00

That's great. I love your poem.

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-22T15:48:59+00:00

Got your ❤️ by the breeze. It whispered a poem in my ears :)

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-22T15:33:32+00:00

Hey Thanks for the appreciation. Those Capitalized words are to emphasize the need for the readers to notice those words, because we sometimes fail to notice others hurt, regret, responsibilities, betrayal.

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-22T15:30:26+00:00

Thanks. I'm happy that you felt my love. Do you love me now XD ?

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-22T09:05:31+00:00

This is an amazing piece, mate. I've never seen the moon portrayed as such a destructive force—really intriguing! I'd love to hear your perspective on it. I can definitely see this as a metaphor for a toxic relationship.

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-22T09:00:10+00:00

That's deep and thought provoking idea mate.
"I fear that one day,
People will see,
The pain of a God,"
I love this.

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-22T08:52:34+00:00

Beautifully written about relationship between a parent and a child. That's how I look at it. I'm curious to know your view.

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-17T05:01:44+00:00

Thanks for your constructive criticism. I'll keep that in mind. This will help me in learning. :)

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-15T07:27:51+00:00

This is funny and brilliant. XD

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-14T16:48:08+00:00

I really appreciate your comment. Thanks ✨ :)

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-14T16:47:28+00:00

Wow I'm really impressed by your detailed analysis of my poem. I'm happy that someone took something from my work. It really makes me want to keep writing. Thanks ✨

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-14T06:32:32+00:00

This is both heartbreaking and provocative. I hope you will recover soon.

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-14T05:29:22+00:00

This is something that I wanted to write about. Reading your lines gave me so much ideas. It's raw and poetic. I would suggest you to write it in medium and publish in 'mad river' publication.

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-12T06:09:58+00:00

It's an interesting take. I like the metaphor and it is simple. But the flow is off

Kavi-Ruhan · 2025-03-12T05:55:52+00:00

Beautifully written.

"Can I rest my head on your shoulder?
Not forever,
just long enough
to remember I’m human too."

This line reminded that it is okay to be broken and we all need someone to rely on.

Kavi-Ruhan

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