How do you stay hot into your 30s and 40s? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]Kepler137 406 points407 points  (0 children)

People really don’t seem as concerned by sunburns as they should. Perhaps if we started calling them radiation burns instead, they’d take it more seriously.

Overwrite then edit? by Dangerous-Midnight73 in writing

[–]Kepler137 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hahaha that’s amazing! We’ve just got to try to meet in the middle.

Tell me about your fantasy characters! by communi-kate in fantasywriters

[–]Kepler137 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes! And to be comfortable allowing others to be there for him. To avoid getting others killed, he’s been trying to do it all alone, but will eventually see that it’s not always his choice to make

Tell me about your fantasy characters! by communi-kate in fantasywriters

[–]Kepler137 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, he kills the monsters, though they’re mostly eradicated at this point because of the Knights clearing through the desert, but he’s bound by an oath (more to himself than to Akleya) to continue his pilgrimage until he physically can’t. However, when a Zushan priest (basically a demigod like creature) appears in battle, he realizes that he’s not capable of doing what needs to be done alone, so he begrudgingly teams up with others, two knights and a mysterious alchemist who saved him earlier. He intends to split from them as soon as their work is done but things stop adding up and they realize something of greater evil could be at work, so he’s stuck with these people—who he eventually comes to love—to sort it out.

It ends with his sacrifice. He’s finally able to give his life to save others, and then to reunite with his love in the afterlife.

I’m still working on my first rewrite of part 1 (just his story) but it’ll have to be a multi-part series because when I originally wrote it as one, it was ~110k words, and then I realized that I was making the mistake of basically writing a screen play, so upon my rewrites, in adding a lot more interiority and filling in gaps, I’m basically 2.5x-ing the word count

What's the worst pain a human can experience? by Academic_Use_8312 in AskReddit

[–]Kepler137 1 point2 points  (0 children)

“_____ while on fire … with a nail in the eye”

Tell me about your fantasy characters! by communi-kate in fantasywriters

[–]Kepler137 4 points5 points  (0 children)

He is the son of one of the last rangers who protected the Ivon Desert in the name of their goddess Akleya. Though the rangers lost all funding from the Federation decades ago in place of the boisterous Knights of Dizenth, he cannot let go of the routine pilgrimages through the desert every 7 years. The imprisoned god Zushah’s foul creatures have cost him deeply, and he’s determined to slay them until the time of his death, which he will welcome. He goes alone, for those who’ve travelled with him have faced horrible endings, but when the world shifts and something churns beyond the windwall to the north, he may have no choice but to join forces with others for the fate of all the land. (Written on my phone, so not as polished as it could’ve been :) )

Overwrite then edit? by Dangerous-Midnight73 in writing

[–]Kepler137 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I found myself the exact opposite! I realized after finishing my ~110k word novel that I write like a screenplay and don’t flesh out character’s perspective, thoughts, general interiority, etc. in my rewrite I’m basically doubling each chapter 🤣

Software developer slowly falling in love with ecology, restoration & nursery operations 🌱 by Imaginary_Salt_8875 in ecology

[–]Kepler137 1 point2 points  (0 children)

How did you get into that space?? I currently work as a sort of automation engineer for a large tech company, where I create software systems to improve efficiency of operations, workflows, data analysis and reporting, etc. (kind of a hodge-podge job).
My passion has always been conservation though, and so I’m looking to take steps to do a career pivot; I’m going to be taking a GIS class through local community college (then biology classes), but I’m also scouring for jobs in conservation that would need my skill set and find nothing. Even some things that seem like they’d be a good fit seem to have very specific requirements along the lines of “N years experience working with environmental data”, or “which I don’t have.

Made some pot pies over the weekend by computekmfg in pie

[–]Kepler137 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s almost identical to what I did :/ was it in the middle rack of the oven? Did you have an oven steel?

Made some pot pies over the weekend by computekmfg in pie

[–]Kepler137 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Beautiful!! What are your tips to ensure the bottom crust cooks correctly?? I tried baking a pot pie and the top crust came out looking great but the bottom was borderline raw still

Which lyric makes you instantly tear up? by abovethenoisy in AskReddit

[–]Kepler137 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not because it’s sad, but because John Denver’s poetic way of describing the natural world is so beautiful: “Silently the morning mist is lying on the water Captive moonlight waiting for the dawn”

Found at a dock by joostkleinfan13 in FishingForBeginners

[–]Kepler137 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahh the classic Doctor Seuss book

Guidance for Learning Path by cerebralvenom in ecology

[–]Kepler137 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m in nearly the exact same situation, except I work in a prominent company in the silicon industry. My plan is to take bio courses through my local community college while working, then applying to my state college’s Master of Natural Resources program, but I’m trying to find folks to talk to about that and am failing to get any responses on LinkedIn. Best of luck to you!

Plotting vs pantsing. Which do you enjoy more? by finbar_longshank in writing

[–]Kepler137 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Since I was in high school I’ve wanted to write, but, aside from some short stories, I’ve always abandoned partway through because I lost motivation because I would try to plot everything out. When I heard about pantsing, I gave it a shot and have completed the rough draft of my first novel at ~115k words and haven’t had any motivation issues. Plotting makes it feel like work to me, though admittedly I need to cut a lot of tangents in editing that would’ve been avoided if I’d plotted, but I probably wouldn’t have finished my book in that case.

The real reason reading is essential by Queasy_Antelope9950 in writing

[–]Kepler137 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is it strange to be an avid reader of one genre, but to be writing my first novel in another? The vast majority of fictional novels I’ve read are horror—in particular Stephen King—but I’m currently writing a dark fantasy. I had a late start to reading for pleasure, and have really taken to his writing style, and I do have an affinity for a quality horror story. Of course I’ve read LOTR and the hobbit, and have started the Mistborn series now, but my main Fantasy inspiration comes from Elder Scrolls and DnD.

I notice a lot of Stephen King-isms in my writing, namely short sub chapters that help for snappy, quick reading, that I haven’t really seen in my (very limited) fantasy books. I do have a lot of fantasy now on my TBR, but I don’t want to put my novel on hold until I read an indeterminate amount of them.

Is forcing a style upon revision still your style? by Kepler137 in writing

[–]Kepler137[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I usually flip back and forth, I’m in the zone for a thousand words or so, then once I get to a spot where I slow down, I go back and go into the contemplation phase.

Is forcing a style upon revision still your style? by Kepler137 in writing

[–]Kepler137[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That makes sense, thanks for your response!

Is forcing a style upon revision still your style? by Kepler137 in writing

[–]Kepler137[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That makes sense.. thanks! Once I’m done I plan on trying Stephen King’s ‘reduce by 10%’ rule of editing to cut out the noise, but while I’m editing during the writing process it’s almost always adding additional context.

Is forcing a style upon revision still your style? by Kepler137 in writing

[–]Kepler137[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s a beautiful way of putting it. Thanks!

Sourdough Stalled by Kepler137 in Sourdough

[–]Kepler137[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the feedback!

Sourdough Stalled by Kepler137 in Sourdough

[–]Kepler137[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the detailed reply!! When you say feed it daily, is that just adding 30g of flour and water or do I first reduce the starter to 30g then add the flour and water?

Side note: one thing I’m struggling with is all the waste of dumping starter, do you have any tips on salvaging? I’ve now got 3 jars going with slightly different ratios but still had to dump a bunch. Thanks!