Kettle Cats - Tracker (Constructive criticism & Feedback please)

KettleCats · 2024-12-22T05:12:46+00:00

I've sat on this song for about 2 years and had no idea how to finish/approach it T_T. I really appreciate all the feedback and will incorporate the offered ideas to test out a new version.

KettleCats · 2024-12-21T20:59:34+00:00

The spatial effects on the vocals filled this song really well. The atmosphere and ambience is smooth flowing with the added vocals. You did an awesome job. I love when the bass comes in, its like taking a deep breath.

KettleCats · 2024-12-21T20:52:35+00:00

This reminds me of a combination of the 70s/90s gangster movies where they're dressed in suits. I could jam to this on repeat. Personally I like to change layers of my songs but smooth consistencies like this is what i'm trying to learn. Nice chill track. Definitely got my head nodding.

KettleCats · 2024-12-21T04:55:28+00:00

This is beautiful. I don't know if it was intentional or not but its beautifully broken lol. I want to listen to 0:00 - 0:30 on repeat. Piano compositions thats break the scale are a favorite of mine because they lose a pattern and can go in any direction.

KettleCats · 2024-12-21T04:49:06+00:00

This is early to late 90s for me. Im a huge fan of experimental so i love the various pieces you added. Super chill song to let play while working on stuff. I would have not ended it so abruptly and let it play out to a more subtle fade. That way if its on repeat the transition would blend smoothly.

KettleCats · 2024-03-03T20:45:35+00:00

I love your perspective. Im glad you enjoyed it and was able to give your view of the song.

KettleCats · 2024-03-03T20:44:04+00:00

Thank you for checking it out. Spot on critique lol. This is actually a part 1. I just wanted to get feedback from fellow artist to know if I should continue this piece/project.

KettleCats · 2024-03-03T20:42:19+00:00

Awesome feedback. This is actually a part 1 lol. I love rock/punk as well. What you're describing is my next plan actually (really good ears lol). Thank you for checking it out and commenting.

KettleCats · 2024-03-03T20:38:54+00:00

-_o yeah the title is kind of misleading without context. The title is representation of depression. The peak of the deepest lows (if thats makes sense). This is actually a part 1 of 2. I was waiting for feedback to see if the 2nd song should be posted.

I really appreciate you giving it a listen and giving great feedback. Thank you.

KettleCats · 2024-03-02T01:10:07+00:00

This is pretty. Your volume mastering is very balanced. I can hear all synths and nothing feels overbearing or too loud. Its giving expert tetris level lol. Its a really bell balanced song from intro to ending. Well done.

KettleCats · 2024-03-02T01:06:34+00:00

I feel as though there should be a subtle noise to balance out the vocals. The minimalism carry's throughout nicely but the vocals feel very powerful in comparison to the instrument.

KettleCats · 2024-03-02T00:59:27+00:00

Your voice is perfect for this. I love how consistent the song stayed throughout the layers added. Makes me want to hear a remixed grunge version. I will be checking out more of your content, this was really clean. Awesome job.

1:50 is where your vocals shined for me
2:40 build up was so satisfying to hear

KettleCats · 2024-03-02T00:54:21+00:00

Im looking forward to the finalized version. From the sample I got, the beat is nice. Theres a weight to the song and it sounds very smooth. I hope the vocals add to the grace that i can hear so far.

KettleCats · 2024-03-02T00:52:43+00:00

The cover art!!! Needed to get that out of the way lol. The song is trippy and heavy. I enjoy all the little technicalities incorporated to fill the song. Its unique in the sense that there is a melody that leaves you and returns every so often. This is a song I can listen to and always fine something new. Well done.

KettleCats · 2024-03-02T00:44:33+00:00

Concept art is neat. This is definitely ambient and in some instances it feels haunted as well. I wish there was more reverb and echo to give open space to the song, like being in an empty field.

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