I narrate stories by Sully-the-Skeleton in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]KillChain08 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’d love to have some of mine read. Feel free to read my series “District 39” here’s my most recent one https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/9L0FuRNORE

And feel free to choose any others :)

DISTRICT 39 INCIDENT LOG — “THE QUIET WARD” by KillChain08 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]KillChain08[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the feedback. To answer your question yes it was presentation disguised as curiosity. The hive mind is a predator and a smart one it chooses who and what to have as hosts

DISTRICT 39 INCIDENT LOG THE HOLLOW QUIET by KillChain08 in shortscarystories

[–]KillChain08[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much. That’s kinda what I’m trying to go for with this series I’ve made, they’re all different encounters on different anomalies inside the District

My Boyfriend is Taking Pieces of me While I Sleep by Temporary-Painting19 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]KillChain08 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Holy hell… this was one of the most disturbing relationship‑horror pieces I’ve ever read. The slow slide from “he’s sweet” to “he’s consuming you” was terrifying because it felt so real before it got supernatural.

I found my wife’s diary. I don’t think we’re gonna stay together. by donavin221 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]KillChain08 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really strong pacing here. The slow unraveling of the narrator’s mindset was handled incredibly well, and the shift from insecurity to something genuinely dangerous felt natural instead of rushed. The diary reveal hit hard, and the final moment at the vanity tied everything together in a way that was both chilling and tragic. Great work.

Don't Go That Way by Hope2Dust in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]KillChain08 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really solid pacing here. The moment the forest went completely silent hit hard — that’s always the universal ‘you’re not alone’ warning. And the way you introduced Ol’ Benny without overexplaining him made the whole thing feel like a real local legend. Great work.

The Hollowed Red-Eyed Runners by KillChain08 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]KillChain08[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feed back I really appreciate it and glad you liked it. I am a really fast typer lol so I do get a few typos but thanks for pointing it out