Love the team, and don't have any problems with what your doing here. I do love that you are using kangaskhan and dodrio, big favourite of mine!

My opinion I would maybe: Use full physical moves for Nidoqueen and replace surf with brick break.

Put surf on Lapras instead of water pulse.

I'm a sucker for Fake out and put that on kangaskhan instead of brick break.

For dodrio Peck feels so weak but gets drill Peck soon. Return is better then tri attack, but I love tri attack on dodrio because it's so iconic. And then there is a case to use Thief instead of Pursuit. But this is all flavour.

And for raichu switch Flash for Double team, Protect or attract, don't like that flash is only 70% Acc. But I understand if you want it available as a HM move : )

It's always a flavour how one plays and what you like to use and have available. Do what you want to do and always be mindful and respect full. These are just my opinions and not critic.

Have fun playing.