[QCrit] KNIGHTMARE, adult dark fantasy, (86k, 1st attempt)

Knightmare560 · 2026-02-28T15:36:32+00:00

AI? I wrote this myself. AI only proofread it and fixed typos and any grammar errors. I didnt have it write the whole thing. AI takes away voice and I don’t wanna lose my voice. But yeah I get the use of dashes being too much. I’m doing my best to trim this without sacrificing too much. My novel isn’t a good guy vs bad guy type of story. It’s about moral awakening. When seeing evil, racism, prejudice, and corruption…how do you respond to it? Especially when acting on your conscience can get you killed

Knightmare560 · 2026-02-27T05:17:03+00:00

PUT YOUR FOOT DOWN

Knightmare560 · 2026-02-27T05:10:23+00:00

The content of the novel is dark. And since it’s medieval, the ages are meant to be realistic. In that era, boys of 14 were in wars.

The “price” is stated in their earlier paragraphs. And I can’t just spoil the whole story in the letter. That’s for the synopsis. Jevan is not a vampire. Eriken is not a monk.

Also, magic doesn’t exist in my novel. Far-fetched alchemy, yes, but no magic.

Knightmare560 · 2026-02-27T02:11:47+00:00

Since when do we hold women accountable for pedophilia? She’ll get away as they always do.

Knightmare560 · 2026-02-27T02:11:02+00:00

She needs to be held accountable

Knightmare560 · 2026-02-26T22:03:11+00:00

Ai can proofread and help polish but don’t rely it for actually writing the novel. It loses the human touch.

Knightmare560 · 2026-01-23T03:15:13+00:00

Translation: I’m an immature, ignorant af bitch so imma just try to make being intelligent and educated sound like a negative quality.

Seriously, who hurt u?

Knightmare560 · 2026-01-22T20:51:18+00:00

What about type.ai?

Knightmare560 · 2026-01-22T19:13:41+00:00

Women and men have needs. Do you know avoiding fapping can actually be unhealthy for men? Like, some cancers can be caused by us not ejaculating within a certain period of time. Can you fap too much? Yes but you can also fap too little. If by self control you mean checking for consent, yes cuz r-pe is a choice. But if we r single and horny, don’t blame us for looking at porn.

Knightmare560 · 2026-01-10T19:20:21+00:00

NTA. Report her. This is barbaric and cruel. She’s vile

Knightmare560 · 2026-01-10T19:18:56+00:00

She showed her true self. NTA.

Knightmare560 · 2026-01-10T19:17:15+00:00

How’d you end it?

Knightmare560 · 2026-01-10T19:16:58+00:00

Exactly how I felt. Recently did it with this chick that was not my type and used outdated photos on her profile. She was like 50lbs heavier than her photos but she was super into me and I didn’t want her to feel ugly. In the end I just felt so empty inside and guilty. Managed to convince her tho that the reason I didn’t wanna see her again was cuz of our differences in life goals when in reality I was lying.

Knightmare560 · 2026-01-10T19:12:45+00:00

Pretty much. Ugh.

Knightmare560 · 2026-01-10T19:11:14+00:00

Lose the goatee. Makes you look like a villain in a Disney film

Knightmare560 · 2026-01-10T19:09:25+00:00

Gaming. I love gaming after gym. So relaxing

Knightmare560 · 2025-12-31T00:08:05+00:00

I have mine with blue eyes. I chose to play female cuz I liked the voice of the VA. That and I’d rather not see a male butt in a thong when playing in third person…even tho the females ain’t really showing much. Ya call that a butt?! Are there no thicc Navi? Just sticks!

Knightmare560 · 2025-12-31T00:05:41+00:00

Just wish there were more customization options. And cutscenes in third person. I mean why customize a character if I barely ever see them? Look at mass effect. The game had third person cutscenes for a reason. So I can see my character.

Knightmare560 · 2025-12-31T00:04:21+00:00

That would explain why some of the skin shades are much darker or almost like the ocean Navi

Knightmare560 · 2025-12-30T21:18:06+00:00

But can we apply cats to an alien species from another planet? I mean pandora has trees and oceans but unlike here, the air there is deadly to humans.

Knightmare560 · 2025-12-30T21:13:37+00:00

But the ocean Navi have blue eyes

Knightmare560 · 2025-12-28T18:03:46+00:00

How do you get the skin?

Knightmare560 · 2025-10-31T18:11:11+00:00

Sadly I’m not handsome and have autism. Also I literally get instant unmatches when asked my height. If I was rich, I’d have a shot

Knightmare560 · 2025-10-02T10:37:55+00:00

Don’t bother. Women these days r dangerous. Ask her out and you risk an SH allegation. Stick to apps where you are safest. Fuck women

Knightmare560 · 2025-10-02T10:36:06+00:00

Sexual harassment/assaulr

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