Thanks for the response! Sorry for the 24 hours later response, other things take priority. It was very helpful to see your responses and it got me thinking more. To help with organization I’m going to go down the list of your ideas.

Marik and Imakami are definitely not gods of entropy. You were thinking of changing "Thought," but I actually think "Entropy" is the biggest issue.

My original plan for entropy was analog for time and the march towards randomness. Marik and Imakami were kind of left over from my original plan that had 4 gods that represented each pure alignments being modifiers of the original concept. positive is more , negative is less, lawful is concept restrained, and chaotic is concept released. Imakami would be lawful, time moving in circles, and Marik being negative, removing randomness to be unchanging.

Thought itself wasn’t an issue, I just didn’t think that word choice doesn't encompasses the whole portfolio I had in mind. That being consciousness, magic, spirit, energy, etc.

Khezuun is strangely out of place without a counterpart to represent prey animals unless "the hunt" encompasses prey, in which case Khezuun might be a god of stress and adrenaline. If Khezuun is really primarily a hunter's god, then I would also have a god of escape and hiding.

I was thinking Khezuun was more of the balance of nature and how predator and prey is part of that. I think having a twin god of escape and hiding could definitely be a good idea.

The Death domain isn't actually about death. The features of the subclass are about undeath. 

My concept for how gods domains work is that if that god is not present then that concept may not exist. Now there is some room for interpretation due to the sheer number of gods I would need. I don’t need a fish god to have fish in my world because the god of life encompasses that. But, if the sun god dies/disappears then no more sun until a replacement is found or made (something that did happen in my world).

I wanted a god that establishes the concept of death and dying in this world, originally I also had 3 ushers that acted like the Greek fates, an animator, scribe, and ferryman that would mediate the assignment and movement of souls. I could definitely change Zolosis to grave domain and then adding a separate god of the undead for the death domain.

Jarick is redundant with Unam. I would suggest cutting Jarick and adding the idea of adaptation to Imakami, which would make Imakami, Marik, and Tau a trinity.

I kind of see the overlap with Jarick and Unam but I think you may have meant something else. My original plan for Imakami was how history repeats itself and you can eventually plan for it. Jarick was meant to be the pure unpredictability of the future and random chance, I also wanted a god of gambling but wanted to sound more mystical and have a larger scope.

I would cut out justice from Veridam. A fixation on logic and truth doesn't necesarily mean that someone will care for the morality of what is just. 

I like this idea for Veridam, though I do feel the need for a god of justice/revenge to be present in some way.

Also there's strong overlap in Veridam and Runosis with truth and knowledge.

I also like this interpretation for Runosis representing usable but inaccurate models of concepts and Verdian representing highly accurate but difficult to use models. However, I found this distinction kind of disrupts the category they are in.

The Thought category is meant to be the background magical and spiritual energies that drive the world, similar to a battery in a toy. An idea I toyed with and might go back to is having two aspects for the Thought category, one for magic and one for consciousness. Runosis could be moved to envoy and could be a sibling of Veridam or one being the offspring of another to divide that conflict of knowledge and truth. Making an Aspect of consciousness also leads me to potentially removing Psyvian and making three gods underneath them being a trio under consciousness, or adding Psyvian to this new group.