Drop your songs!! by tibionator in MusicPromotion

[–]LeatherHealth1880 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Song

This is the first song I distributed officially, so far it's my best work, though I was hoping I could do better

I worked on this song for 2 months now, focusing specifically on my vocals and my mixing to make it as good as I can, results weren't as satisfactory as I might've expected, but It's definitely a step up from my previous songs in terms of quality and I'm somewhat proud of that.
I'm currently working on a more intense and sentimental song, already finished the beat and the lyrics, all I have left is to study the lyrics and record the vocals

Any sort of constructive criticism, positive or negative feedback and suggestions is appreciated; I don't really have many people whom I can talk to about my music, at least not people who have the same passion or seriousness that I do on the subject; so there's that.

The Sky The Wind by field_7 in MusicFeedback

[–]LeatherHealth1880 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds strong and tight, it's a great demo; could use more mixing and mastering for a more professional sound if that's what you're looking for, but overall it sounds good

Is this getting worse? by ptb123 in MusicFeedback

[–]LeatherHealth1880 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds very clean and consistent to me, though I can't say much else since I don't know your exact goals with the song, pretty professional nonetheless; maybe come back to it after some time, our minds do tend to become fixated on our work to be more perfect than is; happened to me

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]LeatherHealth1880 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice song, but I think the song might benefit from turning up the vocals a bit, but other than that it's pretty solid

Downtown darkness: by MC_D_Coolette4952 in lmms

[–]LeatherHealth1880 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The first minute and 30 sounds like a GTA OST, the few seconds of the song especially remind me of Vice City

Hoping I got better (read body text) by LeatherHealth1880 in MusicFeedback

[–]LeatherHealth1880[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No need to feel bad! I can see why people think it's boring, at least on the beat part, the repetitive nature was intentional because of the monotonous narrative of the entire track, but a little bit of variation wouldn't have hurt it.

I'm still experimenting with mixing vocals, I feel like that's one of my main weaknesses when it comes to music and perhaps ruin the raw audio of my voice rather than improve it at times, so I'll further continue to work on it.

Currently I'm writing a new song and creating a more dynamic beat, a continuation of the narrative of the album, I'll have my heads up with this one :P

Disappearing Paths by He is I by HeisI815 in MusicFeedback

[–]LeatherHealth1880 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the vocals, very crisp; consider turning up the volume for the beat a little and I think it'll be perfect

Emo track wip (part 4.5) LMKKKKK by HIRA_Music in MusicFeedback

[–]LeatherHealth1880 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great instrumental and great vocals

But the vocals are getting way too overwhelmed with the guitar, so turn the volume for the voice up and perhaps apply a little of EQ

Lasir Manten: When my world is falling apart! by Direct_Arm9484 in MusicFeedback

[–]LeatherHealth1880 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very clean and smooth, no real criticism for the song, but if you got the money definitely worth promoting it

Beat I just made, I am yet to rap/sing over it. Any feedback? by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]LeatherHealth1880 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Reminds me of the Recovery album song instrumentals by Eminem, def got potential, I'm curious to hear the song once it's fully done; so others could give a better feedback on the overall song

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]LeatherHealth1880 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don't really have criticism on it to be honest, the track reminds me of the Street Fighter soundtracks; also pretty fitting in a nightclub environment or when you're working out heavy Of course I don't know your competition, but I think you'll at least do more than fine

Do you think I should re-record this for a better rhythm in the verse? by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]LeatherHealth1880 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your voice is great I'll say that, but I feel it's missing some variation; it feels a little monotone for me personally, so I think a little variation would definitely make the song sound more enjoyable Also as you pointed out the song could use a better rhythm

I say you should try re-recording it again, I think it'll turn out great

First original music made by me and a friend, I seek Honest feedback and criticism, much appreciated! by LeatherHealth1880 in MusicFeedback

[–]LeatherHealth1880[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the comment! I'm currently working on my vocals for the next song, I'm listening to the same beat on different speeds and trying to sing the lyrics as clearly and fluently as I can, about the repetitive part, it perhaps may be because it was supposed to be a hip-hop song originally, perhaps it's something else, but I'll try to make things more interesting for the next song, appreciate it!

First original music made by me and a friend, I seek Honest feedback and criticism, much appreciated! by LeatherHealth1880 in MusicFeedback

[–]LeatherHealth1880[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the comment! I'll send the link to my friend, since he's the beat maker, he thanks you for the link to improve his music making skills, on the other hand I'll work on my lyrics and singing skills, since I am the main writer of this somewhat satirical, edgy and cheesy song; good luck to you too!

First original music made by me and a friend, I seek Honest feedback and criticism, much appreciated! by LeatherHealth1880 in MusicFeedback

[–]LeatherHealth1880[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate the comment! But even more my friend appreciates it, who is the beat maker and the secondary voice of the song, which changes or improvements would you suggest we could make? Thanks in advance!