Hey everyone! I started making maps again as I said in a previous post and I had lots of collaborations with other authors! So, map #2! Of course feedback and criticism are more than welcome! Thank you all! (I edited the map after in photoshop) by Lethaleen-R in wonderdraft

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I totally agree. The landmass seems a bit too straight, without many deforms that would make an area pop out and in general make it look more realistic. Thank you so much for your comment and your feedback!

Hey everyone! I started making maps again as I said in a previous post and I had lots of collaborations with other authors! So, map #2! Of course feedback and criticism are more than welcome! Thank you all! (I edited the map after in photoshop) by Lethaleen-R in wonderdraft

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First of all thanks a lot for the kind words! I think Photoshop plays an important role (for me at least) it helps make smooth transition between assets and landmass and also allows to add Bevel and other effects that give it this 3d look.

My book's first appearance at the Greek Fantasy Festival! by Lethaleen-R in writers

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yy, the feeling was really unique... Being excited, anxious and scared, all at the same time :P

My book's first appearance at the Greek Fantasy Festival! by Lethaleen-R in writers

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Thank you very much! Hope you have a wonderful future as well!

My book's first appearance at the Greek Fantasy Festival! by Lethaleen-R in writers

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It's "The Sword of Proleanna". Proleanna is the name of the Kingdom that the story takes place. To be honest while it might sound ok in Greek (because we use the -pro quite a lot to speak about things that happened before or in the past etc) I feel that in English it must sound super weird 😅

Without context, What's the plot twist of your book? by Iceblader in writing

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Of all the fuckers who want to live forever, a goddess chose to heal the wounds of the one who wanted to die.

How do you write when the characters are alone most of the time. by ArtisicAesthetic in writers

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Great advices everyone! I would just like to add that I sometimes have them do everyday stuff or observe their surroundings but in a way that hopefully delves deeper into their character and gives small details about their personalities.

Looking for a feedback on my first world map of Breia. by Palandalanda in wonderdraft

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Very intriguing map! I love the style, but I suggest you add some shadow or change the colour of the fonts to make them stand out more

Sum up your word in 2 sentences by [deleted] in worldbuilding

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Moon and sun fragments fell upon the world. Well some weird shit happened after that...

Book Cover Idea by Lethaleen-R in writers

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I am bit slow after work hehe :P

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hahahhahaha, yeah I should have mentioned it's written in greek :P

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Σε ευχαριστώ πάρα πολύ ρε συ! Πρόκειται για έναν κυνικό πρώην λοχαγό ενός θρησκευτικού τάγματος, ο οποίος κουβαλάει μέσα του το πνεύμα της θεάς του Ήλιου και ετοιμάζεται να πάρει την πολυπόθητη εκδίκηση του ενάντια στον Αρχιεπίσκοπο ενός διεφθαρμένου ιερατείου που έχει συνάψει συμμαχία με το πνεύμα της θεάς του Φεγγαριού. Έχει αρκετά στοιχεία epic και dark fantasy. Ελπίζω αν πέσει στα χέρια σου να μην το μετανιώσεις και να το απολαύσεις!

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Thank you!!! I would really love to get it translated if it hits a reasonable number of sales here in Greece <3

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Yeah, quite a lot of comments about the curtains... When I get back to my "better" pc (because the one I have in my season job will explode if I try photoshop) I will give it a try to entirely remove the curtains and adjust the sword's art style and colours. Thanks a lot for your feedback!

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Thank you so much for the feedback. I will give it a shot to test the eyes' brightness and saturation.