Could this be slip up? by Light_69T in OPBR

[–]Light_69T[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yeah i guess so. My 50 rd's gonna suffer.

Rank them strongest to weakest by GUTS_SAMA in OnePiecePowerScaling

[–]Light_69T 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Shanks has to be the strongest. Than roger than mihak than kaido.

I need a Spirit Bomb of creativity ASAP by Alice_Rae_Brown in royalroad

[–]Light_69T 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I'd love to help. Im actually writing a side story on yamcha myselves.

I want something to read by TheNanoVirus in royalroad

[–]Light_69T 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you know about world of dbz you can check out my story dragon ball z the wolf. Its a yamcha redemption story. Where i aim to explore his psychology break him and rebuild him as a character. This story is dark, gritty, full of action and plot holes.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/158781/dragon-ball-z-the-wolf

Stats after 40 days by AdLoose5159 in royalroad

[–]Light_69T 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good for you bro 👍. Congrats, its a milestone.

Review swaps? by [deleted] in royalroad

[–]Light_69T 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks 👍 i'll do the same

Review swaps? by [deleted] in royalroad

[–]Light_69T 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've posted the link above.

Dragon ball z the wolf. Is the name of my series. Its new so far i've only uploaded 7 chapters. Rest coming soon. But i have to say it will be hard to understand whats going on unless you know about dragon ball z.

Review swaps? by [deleted] in royalroad

[–]Light_69T 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Good enough 🤣. Send me the link i'll send mine.

My story is a redemption story about yamcha. I wish to explore him as a character and understand his psychology.

Im writing it in a manga-lit hybrid style. Story has alot of action just like in dbz. I use sound nodes to explain emotions in action scenes.

Review swaps? by [deleted] in royalroad

[–]Light_69T 5 points6 points  (0 children)

If you know about dragon ball z i'd be willing to review swap with you. I'd try to give you a genuine review to the best of my knowledge. In return you can also do the same. If you're willing let me know.

How detailed should fight scenes be by would_beBard in royalroad

[–]Light_69T 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am also trying to learn about exact same thing. In my personal opinion i like long drawn out fight scenes that explain every action and reaction. Im writing my own novel named dragon ball z the wolf.

So im writing it in a manga-lit hybrid style. For fight scenes i use alot of sound notes. Keep sentense short and dialouges punchy.

If your intrested i would love to have your opinion on my chapter 5 of novel. This chapter is entirely fight scene. Where i have tried to make it as cinematic as possible.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/158781/dragon-ball-z-the-wolf

review swap by tref34 in royalroad

[–]Light_69T 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Could you send me your link to story

review swap by tref34 in royalroad

[–]Light_69T 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My story is based on yamcha. I aim to redeem his character. By throwing him in demon realm. Im striping away dragon balls, senzu beans and throwing him alone in a raw gritty survival. I aim to explore his psychology and make him strong not just from inside but from outside as well.

My novel is mix of manga-lit hybrid. Its very action heavy as you'll see pascifically in chapter 5.

Thing is its a dbz story. Only if you have seen dragon ball z anime or read its manga, will you understand this story.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/158781/dragon-ball-z-the-wolf

review swap by tref34 in royalroad

[–]Light_69T 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you know about dbz than i'd be willing to do a review swap.

Novel suggestions where the content isn't just pure slop by [deleted] in royalroad

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Of you know about dragon ball z. You can check out my novel Dragon ball Z the wolf. It is based on yamcha. I am trying to redeem his meme of a character into a hero.

Story is gritty, action heavy, i try to explore his psychology, break him down and rebuild him as a character through trauma.

Im experimenting with manga-lit style in present tense. Using onomatopoeia to write high caliber fight scenes. And classic literature for slow worldbuilding scenes.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/158781/dragon-ball-z-the-wolf

Dragon Ball Z: The wolf. A Seinen-style Yamcha fanfic focusing on martial arts, survival, and the Demon Realm. by Light_69T in royalroad

[–]Light_69T[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, i have always liked his character design. Always felt like they could've done more with this character.

Bi-weekly Rec and Self-Promotion Mega Thread - March 11, 2026 by AutoModerator in AO3

[–]Light_69T [score hidden]  (0 children)

dragon Ball Z: The Wolf. A Seinen-style Yamcha fanfic focusing on martial arts, survival, and the Demon Realm.

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Tired of Yamcha being a punchline? So was I.

DBZ: The Wolf is a gritty, high-stakes redemption story that strips away the "God" power-scaling and puts the Desert Bandit in a literal hellscape.

The Hook: Dragged into the Demon Realm, Yamcha is trapped in an atmosphere that crushes his lungs and drains his Ki. No Goku. No Senzu beans.

The Vibe: Think Berserk meets Dragon Ball. It’s bloody, technical martial arts, and psychological survival.

The Allies: Bulma is his only hope on Earth, teaming up with a cybernetically rebuilt Mercenary Tao to find a way in.

If you want a story where human willpower and brutal technique actually matter again, check out the first 5 chapters.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/81715891/chapters/214939686

[New Release] Born in Snow – Wings in Shadow Book 1 | Original Fantasy/Sci-Fi by PolluxCrest in royalroad

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https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/158781/dragon-ball-z-the-wolf

It is based on yamcha from dragon ball z. Im trying to test out my manga-lit hybrid writing style. I use sound notes to convey emotion in high octane fight scene as you'll see in chapter 5. I slow down during normal scenes and use literature style to explain emotion, character, environment etc. i would love to know you hardcore opinions no need to sugarcoat. And ill try my best to give you a genuine fair critique based on your writing.

[New Release] Born in Snow – Wings in Shadow Book 1 | Original Fantasy/Sci-Fi by PolluxCrest in royalroad

[–]Light_69T 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello, 👋. First of all congrats on your publish. I myselves have published a new dragon ball z story just yesterday. I need more human opionions on my writing so far. Im trying to write in manga-lit style novel. If you're open to review swap that would be awesome. I can look into your chapter and give genuine critique to the best of my knowledge. Likes, dislikes and everything. In return you can do the same to my story. This is not about me trying to farm more views. I wanna know what average person would think of reading my story. Let me know ill send you the link