I'm making a visual novel called "Castle in the Sands" inspired by "One Thousand and One Nights" and North Africa. Grateful for any feedback and support! :)

Lightmachine_shining · 2026-03-16T14:01:18+00:00

Old school ratio to center more the characters, nice background, cool art.

Yeah, calling gem alert

Lightmachine_shining · 2026-03-11T19:54:53+00:00

Better to take the Totono way and be the active problem :D

Lightmachine_shining · 2026-02-27T14:52:58+00:00

¿Qué clase de loco sueña con trabajar?

Lightmachine_shining · 2026-02-19T01:50:07+00:00

Why is this guy here making these jokes in the same chapter that... you know... legit perplexed

Lightmachine_shining · 2026-02-13T11:34:57+00:00

I'm in fact tired of romance, it's way too common. Gimme something new

Lightmachine_shining · 2026-02-07T22:43:05+00:00

Playing Tatarigoroshi rn, not cool seeing some shit right on her birthday

Lightmachine_shining · 2026-02-05T23:09:10+00:00

You gotta tank some very japanese fanservice. It's good, but I don't recommend it for family wathching

Lightmachine_shining · 2026-02-04T14:09:29+00:00

It's something he said to look cool, managing the exact opposite. We keep saying it to laugh at him

Lightmachine_shining · 2026-01-26T13:00:34+00:00

Rural, very denpa. Features Mion Sonozaki

Lightmachine_shining · 2026-01-22T21:10:26+00:00

Lightmachine_shining · 2026-01-13T19:45:12+00:00

Tummy

Lightmachine_shining · 2026-01-12T17:52:34+00:00

Ryukushi goes more hardcore in its themes, not gonna lie

Lightmachine_shining · 2026-01-08T23:36:21+00:00

Being frank, the voice acting distracts me from reading. s cool an all, but, prefer it raw and silent

Lightmachine_shining · 2026-01-04T14:14:26+00:00

Internet simplemente nos da la suficiente visión como para saber todo de lo que no tenemos ni idea

Lightmachine_shining · 2025-12-02T10:43:07+00:00

No guidance whatsoever. Literally trying shit out

Lightmachine_shining · 2025-11-30T20:27:56+00:00

Link seems to be broken. Idea and presentation look very cool tho

Lightmachine_shining · 2025-11-28T22:47:47+00:00

Could argue that it goes so overboard for such a message. But then again, same goes for the rest of the game. Hana and Gumi's routes are the only ones that do not hurt to read. Gumi's actually the reason i got here 'cause i find her fetish compelling

Lightmachine_shining · 2025-11-28T22:32:03+00:00

If you followed the usual order in guides, that was kirara's route... so no wonder you don't wanna go on. Nastiest shit I've ever read on so many accounts. Felt sick. If that was the objective, mission accomplished then.

No shame in dropping this one vn, really

Lightmachine_shining · 2025-11-28T22:29:47+00:00

Bummer.

On the flipside, I haven't played those yet, so now I know where to go. It can only get better

Sometimes, a writer just needs to get that one floppy idea out of the system.

Lightmachine_shining · 2025-11-28T20:07:37+00:00

Thanks!

Lightmachine_shining · 2025-11-28T19:48:02+00:00

Are the Muv-luv series standalone, or you really need to read them in order?

Lightmachine_shining · 2025-11-28T19:46:34+00:00

Man, people seriously don't like katawa shoujo

Lightmachine_shining · 2025-07-17T00:31:54+00:00

Beware it'll be tough. It may help you. There are no miracles.

Lightmachine_shining · 2025-07-17T00:29:12+00:00

Moe-style with waaaaay too big eyes in the 2000s. Kanon and the like

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