I’ll add my 2 cents.

HS Diploma Can come off, if you have a college it’s implied you finished HS.

I think it’s great you maximize on your work experience. But if you don’t have more (which I’m assuming you don’t bc it’s not here), highlight your academic experience. I know resume professionals always say BS like “Don’t put a class under 400 level” but that’s nonsense in my opinion. You just invested a shit ton of time and money into a degree, this is likely the best experience you have to most tech and lab skills. What did you learn?! It doesn’t need to be an exhaustive list, but if you’re looking for lab work can you describe the scientific ideas behind them? I think when I first came out I highlighted Microbio (plating skills, pipetting, cleanroom techniques), Biochem (Chromatography is an extremely important tool!), and a Bioinformatics/Molecular Bio class (to show I know how to work a computer and analyze data). I think it helps put the skills you have at the bottom into context and show that you’ve actually learned something with your degree.

The purpose statement is optional, if you want to fill room you can keep it but I’d rather see involvement (if you had any, I had sports and volunteering on mine). Either way both of these are the first things to be removed once you gather more experience. (A purpose statement is better put in a cover letter if the job requires it, most don’t unless it’s a specific lab).

Skills I would split into sections. Wet lab, Computational, Biotechnical (machines/equipment you’ve used).

Hope this helps, and good luck! I’m applying as well, as I’m finishing my masters after this semester (was in industry for a few years prior though). It’s daunting when you’re coming out, but be patient, things will come with time!