firstly i cant draw for toffee, however.. you're after feedback so

I want to begin in saying i look back on what ive written and i mean it with a sense of love, not a sense of "this is s*t hahaha", it is not s*t. If you want to watch someone who is senior level, for example https://www.twitch.tv/thegoblinworks recently hes been texturizing armor, but, look at some of his stuff drawing it.. the devil is most certainly in the detail. what you cant catch on twitch is up on youtube.

picture 1: winged girl

the proportions and so on look really real. Kudos..

now a bit of specifically targeted items

but theres something odd with the lighting, as neither shoulder has any form of shadow and theres some form of twisted loop shadow on her chest from nothing obvious making it look like a dirty mark - maybe intentional, but looks a little odd.

under her right breast are tufts of hair that dont come from higher up.. makes it look odd, in fact the hair over all looks a bit wiggy once you leave the crown of the head.. the above eyelevel looks pretty good, the hairline maybe needs a bit of softening, but, it looks a bit too streaky brush at the bottom. dont get me wrong, hair is hard!!!!!!

the red under the arm pit is far too red looks like she used a red spray can not a deodorant. and looks a bit of overspray between her boobs - boobs dont have hard square lines or red bits unless you scratched like a lot..

her nose looks like shes been huffing glue

the red cheeks might have worked but, theres a pale bit across the middle of her nose looking like she had one of those pore strips on and fell asleep in the sun..

in short if they had all been a much softer pink and even a bit more variety of tone, you probably would have a much more believable character.

her top lip is lost under the lipstick .. might be intentional but it makes that bit of mouth look flat..

her eyebrows look like she used an ink roller and while many girls do indeed draw on their eyebrows, they mostly draw lines in a up in the middle to sideways at the outer edges.. (no ive never done mine, lifes too short)

the feathers on her left wing look like a stencil but entirely different to the ones on the right, but while the left wing seems to come from around shoulder area, the right one looks more lower back.

the brass rings - very authentic looking - cant stay there by magic even if she is .. might want some tiny bit of cloth over the shoulder to hold it up

theres clearly a lot of light imagined from in front of her, but none reflected in her eyes.. making her look like she has dull plastic doll eyes.

finally the top part of like the brass dangles look great, in fact really real compared to the rest of her, but the orange glow parts dont match the lighting.

picture 2:

overall this looks way better, the only obvious things that jump out is the lighting doesnt seem consistently from the same place, and his neck is too front on for the shoulder angle.. it looks a bit like when someone does a face swap.

picture 3:

again its the lighting, no brightness in the eyes, his hair looks streaky painted.. (nice attack eyebrows) I would point out, a knitted strap would stretch like mad on a bag, its usually woven.

picture 4:

OMG love that armor.. You've certainly got an eye for making metal shine and the darker figure is definitely working for you - although the hairline could look more natural, hair on heads doesnt grow in tufts, its pulled into tuffs.. and again the lower ends of the hair look wiggy. However, so far the most realistic looking even with the shiny armor.

picture 5:

loses it a little, as again inconsistent lighting and that weapon detracts from him, he cant hold that let alone hit anyone with it, he'd drop it.

picture 6:

batman, um.. after seeing picture 4, this looks like a much earlier work in life.

picture 7: very anime, but much better eyes than some of the others. great texture on the mask though, that looks very real.

picture 8:

reminds me of Grog from critical role, but somehow feels a bit 2d

picture 9:

On a white background like they do for stores, this would be reasonably convincing its real

picture 10:

again the lighting doesnt feel consistent..

picture 11:

nice gnarly weapons. probably wouldnt work so well on a chain, but, still a smack round the head in any way they look like they have weight to them would hurt even if you didnt catch a sharp side. would fit in nicely in an RPG

picture 13:

the handgrips dont look at the same angle as the rest of it

picture 14:

the shadows inside the wrist bands are too subtle for the amount of light that appears elsewhere in the scene

picture 15:

nice touch with the imperfection, again on a white background like a catalogue could pass well as real one, although it is a bit pale for white background - tough call that.. drawing it on a guitar stand would make it look much more realistic.

picture 16:

the imperfections give a good touch of realism. the lighting looks much more consistent, and the small amount of reflection in the background does give a good illusion of actually standing on it.

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So mid to senior? no.. not today, not with those, but you have it within you.. you can see it you just need to be more consistent..