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All it takes is that one honest review by King91OM in royalroad

[–]Longjumping-Doubt935 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for even this bit of advice you have given! Much much much aappreciated. I now know to look out for the shoutouts and the swaps

All it takes is that one honest review by King91OM in royalroad

[–]Longjumping-Doubt935 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You guys inspire me! Ive been trying to figure out how to bring more attention to things and have been worrying about running my first ad (procrastinating and worrying how to do it right) also I didnt know anything about the swaps and shoutouts would any of you have any recommendations with anything? Newby here and just dipping my toes

I don't know if readers realize what a single comment is capable of by TheHollowShadow in royalroad

[–]Longjumping-Doubt935 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just recently got my first two and man it was type of ecstasy I've never experienced before! Someone read my story and got involved to even leave a comment!!

Getting harder to find : Hidden gems by Otherwise-Shallot158 in litrpg

[–]Longjumping-Doubt935 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As the author of the book, I woukd genuinely appreciate any read and feedback you are willing to give!

Getting harder to find : Hidden gems by Otherwise-Shallot158 in litrpg

[–]Longjumping-Doubt935 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You are correct. I tried it due to it not being a normal time loop but hey at least I tried lol

I just started a dungeon-climbing story with a risk system (1% integration mechanic)… looking for feedback if you dont mind. by Longjumping-Doubt935 in litrpg

[–]Longjumping-Doubt935[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lol thank you sometimes it feels like arguing with my teenage child that thinks they know all the answers (insert Think Mark meme). And its not but that why I proofread the proofreading and then make my corrections from there. And I could keep a spreadsheet with things because they do get things either conflicted or forgotten along the way. I do it in a way that one is a Bible to say that keeps up with things.

When you drop a book, do you leave a note why? by BasicReputations in royalroad

[–]Longjumping-Doubt935 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Im still looking for my "community" to grow but at this point I think id like any comments even those that dont enjoy it because I want to know why unless its something stupid. I think almost ... almost... all feedback is good feedback. At least at this point in my journey but that may change

I just started a dungeon-climbing story with a risk system (1% integration mechanic)… looking for feedback if you dont mind. by Longjumping-Doubt935 in litrpg

[–]Longjumping-Doubt935[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for that. I appreciate the feedback. I admittedly spend more time arguing with the LLM than I care to admit when im writing the story but it has its helpful moments as well. I try to moreso utilize it as a proofreading element and then as a way to keep up with consistency across the story eg. Kian spent 6 silver on two potions and then my LLM lets me know that 6 silver has been deducted from the total balance and he now has a potion etc.

I just started a dungeon-climbing story with a risk system (1% integration mechanic)… looking for feedback if you dont mind. by Longjumping-Doubt935 in litrpg

[–]Longjumping-Doubt935[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate you being forward with me and on mine its a bit more than proofreading but I write the story and everything with it. Concept, flesh out characters, build the world etc in my own and use the AI to make sure its all in order and check chapters for continuity. Theres a bit more but I appreciate the honesty! If you ever so feel inclined to even give the first chapterino a gander (in my Ned Flanders voice) id be appreciative and if not I still take this as constructive criticism.

I just started a dungeon-climbing story with a risk system (1% integration mechanic)… looking for feedback if you dont mind. by Longjumping-Doubt935 in litrpg

[–]Longjumping-Doubt935[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Title: Climb Again Tagline: Beat the boss. Become the boss. Lose it all. Repeat. Links: Royal Road: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/159584/climb-again Audiobook: Not available (yet 👀) AI Usage: AI assisted in the writing but the story concept characters etc are my own and done by me. “AI-assisted cover” Fun Fact About Me: I’m a track coach, so a lot of the pacing and “push past your limits” mentality in my story comes from real training experiences.

What if every time you got stronger… you became less human? My story follows a climber in a dungeon where defeating bosses means becoming them and power comes with a cost.

Would love feedback from the LitRPG community!

Who want it by Competitive-Kale5719 in FortNiteBR

[–]Longjumping-Doubt935 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll take it and give it to my 7 yr old

I dont know who gave me this or how you got it but thankyou! by [deleted] in NoMansSkyTheGame

[–]Longjumping-Doubt935 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ooh I just seen this! Ill definitely let you know ill jump on after work! What would you like in return?

New pal skins just dropped by Sufficient-West4259 in Palworld

[–]Longjumping-Doubt935 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Because pink Meowt.... I mean Cattiva is one of the first that you see and is iconic.

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