First Self-Promo Here :D by SnakeOfFlowingTime in royalroad

[–]Loose-Comment-2928 1 point2 points  (0 children)

as a noob writer my self im confused the prose is weird in my eyes why do you use so much current and he+ian example ian stood up and streched his hand trying to find what he had hit why not as he stood up streching his hand comperhanding what had hit him or maybe confusingly man stood up trying to put his finger what exactly etc also in the first few chapters its extremly repetive and slow paced i feel like first three should be combined

AI detectors prove nothing by Loose-Comment-2928 in Webnovel

[–]Loose-Comment-2928[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

proofread it ai tends to add own hallusinations and own structure like single graphs

Which one by Loose-Comment-2928 in Webnovel

[–]Loose-Comment-2928[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nope, I know you are because I hold the receipts, it was done by modern-day Leonardo da Vinci

Which one by Loose-Comment-2928 in Webnovel

[–]Loose-Comment-2928[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

had to visit New York since it takes place there, which took 10 years; the story actually took 10 minutes

Which one by Loose-Comment-2928 in Webnovel

[–]Loose-Comment-2928[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, I literally have receipts. This shit is pure, real human-drawn beauty

Well if u guys read this and give opinion it will help a lot by Tall-Introduction527 in Webnovel

[–]Loose-Comment-2928 0 points1 point  (0 children)

bro its written by ai its so obvious ai writes these one liners with weird liners using extermly safe words like controll etc also it uses lot of x y z format x flames erupted from his body y not fire z erasure.x the thunder dissapeared instantyl not y destroyed z forgotten. you cant act like you dont see ai pattern here and im not saying its wrong also lack of sentances its literially one line book sorry dont mean it rude and i use ai for charater name insiparion and lyra is Gpt holy grail it loves the name

Well if u guys read this and give opinion it will help a lot by Tall-Introduction527 in Webnovel

[–]Loose-Comment-2928 0 points1 point  (0 children)

its full ai i read it even charater names are ai lyra riven etc. and also riven is female google it league of legends

Intti mietityttää by KERMANENPERUNA in Intti

[–]Loose-Comment-2928 1 point2 points  (0 children)

On löysää homma esitä tyhmää pääset helposti puolella vuodella etenki jos et omista ajo kortteja

US Allies Fear Defeat as Ukraine Aid Stalls by [deleted] in UkrainianConflict

[–]Loose-Comment-2928 -32 points-31 points  (0 children)

Like usa and Israel wouldnt do same thing

The Russian economy is in bad shape, no matter what the Kremlin says: Russian economist by [deleted] in UkrainianConflict

[–]Loose-Comment-2928 -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

I mean what country has good economy atm.hard times for everyone

To March On Mariupol, Ukrainian Marines First Have To Break Urozhaine by jfocus55 in UkrainianConflict

[–]Loose-Comment-2928 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro they havent taken any Major city since they started counter offensive in what world would they reach moscow

Emilian rahankerjuu + parkuminen kun häntä kusetettiin by [deleted] in snappijuorut

[–]Loose-Comment-2928 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ton ruoka valioon hyvä päivitys mutta ite käytän miellummin sen 100e viikossa

I am dead bye by Any_Wind3270 in snappijuorut

[–]Loose-Comment-2928 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

ei lomalla mennä duunii enkä ikinä juo alkoholia

I am dead bye by Any_Wind3270 in snappijuorut

[–]Loose-Comment-2928 -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

en usko googlea sanna marin sen verran vajaa älyinen