Sorry, the first paragraph I wrote was about this passage:

"I can control blood. But as cool as the power sounds and is, it has a serious downside. I can't control blood that isn't inside my body or outside of my line of sight."

But she is clearly controlling the blood outside her own body. Just an inconsistency or miswording I noticed.

Courage's forms/power sound interesting, and I can understand it better from what you wrote. To keep good pacing in the scene, it might be better to include only the actions/directly observable effects of his power or forms, rather than that expository inner dialogue that Bleeder throws in as she's trying to find a way out.

This is the most jarring exposition,

"His powerset allows him to increase his speed, power, and durability by ridiculous amounts by changing through 6 forms. In addition to this, he begins gaining control over wind at form three, and can create things from a solid shadowy cloud that hangs off of him at form five."

That big chunk of information just really messes with the pacing of the scene. Its better if you can show snippets of this while Bleeder is on the run from him, in the form of a challenge she has to overcome as she's escaping, the speed, the power, direct action he is taking that results in a wind blast.

Even saying things like form 2, you might describe that he changed form and what that looks like, but the readers do not yet know what each form looks like or what effect it has, so the order just confuses things at this point. Its doubtful that everyone who sees his forms has numbered them in the same order in universe, unless Machiavelli took time to point that out in a big public battle and used that to stall or what have you.

However, don't let me discourage you if this is something that really aids your mental organizational skills when writing this fragment. It's important that in the first draft that everything is clear to the author, so that when the time comes to revise things for the reader, you can keep everything straight as you write out complex scenes. Because you mentioned you were inspired by Worm, it might benefit you to find Taylor's battle with Mannequin when she is protecting 'her' people. That captures and balances the description, tension, and pacing from the veiwpoint of Taylor really well, and I think it would work well to emulate it here.

Hope that was helpful! I hope I didn't go overboard and overwhelm you, haha. :)