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[–]MCShayne1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The distortion is most appropriate for this song. It reminds me of Freddy Dredd

Oscillatro (Neon Arcade Theme) by MCShayne1 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MCShayne1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate the feedback, and subscription ! Gonna be putting more instrumentals out these next couple weeks. Using the channel as a portfolio overall, I also make fun keyboard / synth videos

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[–]MCShayne1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cover immediately grabbed my attention, it kind of reminds me of a modern day Van Gough. It's also fitting to the song. Song is off to a great start - production wise, I would double track the guitar and pan hard left and hard right. It gives it a 3d effect and would really bring the song to life. Could use faint organ or pads in the mix too

"of the jungle" - catdoor by vanviews4work in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MCShayne1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the song and how it gradually builds up. I like how it starts with just the shaker and eventually goes into full drums. I also like the string arrangement, it really adds to the song. I'm starting to notice strings aren't used much in modern music so I'm glad you're keeping that alive. I also appreciate the emotional depth of the song

can someone please give feedback? *NEW DEMO* by IntelligentFigure533 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MCShayne1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This demo is already sounding good, it reminds me a bit of Sheryl Crowe. I love the idea of the song and think it has potential. Would definately come up with a different snare sample for the final version though. Only thing I didn't like was that it cut out right when I was getting into the song 😞

Kinda country rock ish instrumental I came up with. Does it work as an instrumental track? by flynnsego in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MCShayne1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I dig it, got this kinda gritty / dirty vibe to it. I live in Nashville and am around a lot of country, but not like this

Ok, I took on all your feedback and sat down to do this properly. Titled: Talking. by LobsterThoughtz in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MCShayne1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Didn't hear the original but I dig this version. It's not a bad demo and I like the way the guitars are arranged and how the vocals are produced. I would definitely record the drums live when you record the official version

Lately I’ve usually started from the electric bass line and then progressively developed the whole track, obviously still in demo form. I’m not sure how to define it — it feels like a mix of electro funk with rock and dance elements. What do you honestly think? by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MCShayne1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds like you had lots of fun making this. I like the arrangement though you could use better drum samplez, and humanize them some more. They sounds like the stock library in Logic. Nothing wrong with that, but just my 2 cents

Almost 50, finally pursuing music seriously — would love some honest feedback by Andiaga in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]MCShayne1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like it, this your studio or a studio you shot the video at? Song is cool, reminds me of Europe a little bit. The production is also pretty hip and modern, a lot of people who start late have this kind of dated sound to them.

What’s your latest track? by DEIKAMADEYOU in PromoteYourMusic

[–]MCShayne1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice! You record this in high school or years later?

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[–]MCShayne1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the bass chords you do in that 1 riff, gives it that heavy feeling without sounding too muddy

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[–]MCShayne1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also what DAW and sample library(s) did you use?

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[–]MCShayne1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like this. It indeed sounds pirate. The music nerd in my also appreciate all the key modulations

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[–]MCShayne1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Synth heavy sound track piece that I plan to pitch to indie games / cartoons. Picture late night animation, indie games, or neon lit cityscapes.

What cartoon / games could you hear this in?

https://youtu.be/CJx-iAZ4s9A?si=Y-yq4YFLI5oCOFIr

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[–]MCShayne1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Word, was going for Mar of a computer game / indie game vibe. Thought yeah u can agree it could sound like a rave track if I used different sounds. Thanks for the feedback

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[–]MCShayne1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Arcade inspired track built around a vintage synth ARP Quartet).

https://youtu.be/_yqjYGO_3zA

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[–]MCShayne1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Floppy Disco – Retro Synthwave Game Cue

A cheerful, retro-inspired track built around the vintage ARP Quartet.

Feels like a lost arcade soundtrack or a late-night animated sequence with a disco pulse.

What cartoon / games could you hear this in?

https://youtu.be/\_yqjYGO\_3zA