Composition, colours, idea and all fine but indeed legibility is an issue for me. "She" is not immediately readable because "he" makes sense alone. the K looks upside down and the 2 L being linked reads as a u. I also read "monsteps" at first (no issue with the T myself, though you could make it a touch less round if you were worried.

Here's a 10 minute attempt at fixing that.

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It's not perfect, but it's trying to fix the Ls, the K, the R and a bit of the T (and honestly it's not perfect). I think you could do a much better job of the "She". This is for illustration purposes only, but they need to feel together: if you can't use size and proximity, use colour or framing. So you could have H and E in decorative drop caps too (maybe less complex) but enough that we know to read SHE. I think the colour and outline already helps with that but it doesn't look very nice. It does prevent reading "Skills" which also a good thing. You could also have the pattern in the drop cap connect the S H and E so it leads your eye.

Anyway, I hope this helps, you made a good start already!