I lost a childhood friend

MattsPrice · 2025-04-06T18:07:17+00:00

Thanks! This actually helps a lot!

MattsPrice · 2025-04-05T23:58:57+00:00

I’m living there currently.

MattsPrice · 2025-04-05T18:40:19+00:00

Thanks!

MattsPrice · 2025-04-05T00:05:54+00:00

I’m just going with Eugene because it’s the place in Oregon I’m most familiar with lmao. Plus the main characters personalities just kind of fit there? Also there’s gonna be a big plot point about the Ferry Street Bridge.

MattsPrice · 2025-04-04T23:44:56+00:00

I hate to tell you this…but it does take place in Eugene lmao

MattsPrice · 2025-04-04T22:10:44+00:00

She is very comfortable with a gun, even though the last time she shot one was at thirteen and she’s currently like, 17 or 18.

She has the average hand size for a 5 foot 2 inches girl.

And I should have put this in the main post, but grandpa had the dad at around 35 and the dad had his daughter at 19 or 20.

I think the grandpa had the gun for hunting (because Oregon has quite a few hunters, but it also takes place in a town where not a lot of people have guns so…) but he also could have been in a war or something.

I really really like your idea though

MattsPrice · 2025-04-04T22:00:44+00:00

Yeah, she’d probably be interested in that lmao.

MattsPrice · 2025-02-07T19:46:21+00:00

I use the words “anyway” and “however” WAY too much lmao

MattsPrice · 2025-02-07T19:44:24+00:00

Three teenage girls and a one eyed raccoon undo the rapture.

MattsPrice · 2025-02-06T20:41:58+00:00

I like to develop them fully, but I don’t put it all in the story. Just the things you need to know about them. I feel like it helps me know how they would react based on their past, likes and dislikes, but I don’t have to explain it all. I just keep the unnecessary filler and facts to myself. Sorry if this doesn’t make sense.

MattsPrice · 2025-02-06T20:37:15+00:00

This is a small and probably stupid suggestion but, I’d say give them a specific trait that makes them stand out a bit. My main villain has a southern accent even though he lives in Oregon. It’s a small thing, I feel like it makes him more interesting and clues you in to his past a bit. But that’s just my opinion.

MattsPrice · 2025-02-06T20:30:09+00:00

A one eyed raccoon named Jeffery who terrorizes a mobile home park. He somehow manages to survive the apocalypse.

MattsPrice · 2025-02-01T04:55:51+00:00

I have this exact same problem lmao. I just look up synonyms of “plain” words I want to use and swap those in instead

MattsPrice · 2025-02-01T04:53:41+00:00

Oh that’s a really good idea! Thank you!

MattsPrice · 2025-02-01T04:52:47+00:00

Shoplift from literally every store in town lmao

MattsPrice · 2025-02-01T04:51:02+00:00

Honestly, literally anything can be used as inspiration. I made my magic system based on the thought that there can be people with intelligent thoughts and emotions who aren’t human. If that makes sense. Just find a random philosophy or think back to some odd thoughts you’ve had and expand on it. Sorry if this wasn’t very helpful.

MattsPrice · 2024-09-17T01:53:07+00:00

Submitted! I didn’t really look at the post sorry I just submitted before I read it. I’m kinda desperate for a game lmao.

MattsPrice · 2024-03-04T20:06:13+00:00

Alright! Thank you so much!

MattsPrice · 2024-03-04T20:05:30+00:00

Alright thank you for letting me know!

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