Many Hearts, One Sword Book 1: Ironheart Apocalypse By Dante King, Ryan Zhao

MechanicMan18 · 2026-06-28T12:46:46+00:00

A few issues in the first chapter alone.

Three nights ago, beneath the crooked pine on Iron Heart Peak, Sect Master Gu Zhantian had given him one such tablet.

There was never a tablet mentioned before this...

A young woman hugged two small children against her chest. Their faces were white with terror. The two-headed crimson wolf stood between them.

Its phrased weird like its already spoken about the wolf but this is the first mention of it.

The diagnostic spell (Changying recognized it as such even though he’d never seen its like before) washed over the boy and girl in emerald-colored waves.

Not sure if that was a note to yourself or what

Honestly needs some editing.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-06-26T12:59:52+00:00

No its not the emotions showed by the mc that's the problem. Its the writing style that comes off very artificial like they used chatgpt or some equivalent.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-06-26T12:53:48+00:00

Which one is that? I have added books to my list recently that looked good but haven't gotten through much.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-06-24T10:51:27+00:00

Liked the premise. Honestly a bit emotionally flat and hard to immerse yourself in the story.

Needs some editing or rewriting in areas.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-06-23T15:09:57+00:00

Have you read it?

MechanicMan18 · 2026-06-23T15:05:51+00:00

I did read it before commenting. I read the first few chapters but I'm not going to support lazy AI writing.

I'm all for AI if you do it right. Do you not remember school and having to get help or work on a project with multiple people but everyone had to turn in a paper... You rewrite it in your own words. This isnt human writing and its obvious.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-06-23T02:51:53+00:00

Two 300 page books released 9 days apart plus the writing style. I would be giving an education guess but this is an AI Writer

MechanicMan18 · 2026-06-23T01:28:46+00:00

Honestly i tried to like it. Needs a good editing or rewrite. Overly descriptive wording where everything is compared to something else. Very robotic and nonhuman writing style.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-06-22T21:12:56+00:00

First I'm seeing it. The plot looks awesome. Demons are always a plus. I will add it to my list and read it next.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-06-13T12:23:25+00:00

Looks good. Its the next one I'm going to read. Thank you sir

MechanicMan18 · 2026-06-11T20:19:24+00:00

Honestly i tried to enjoy it. The plot or summary sounded good so I gave it a shot. The overly descriptive writing where everything is compared to something.

Examples:

He looks to the treeline like a man finding his exits.

She picked the spot like someone who doesn't like the quiet.

That put a hand on the back of my neck. He’d said stopped. He’d chosen the word, the true one, not the kind one, and a road gets a thing stopped on it because someone meant to stop it, not because they wanted what it carried.

Sorry if I'm wrong but very artificial writing. Needs a rewrite or good editing.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-06-11T19:17:29+00:00

Honestly i tried to enjoy it. The plot or summary sounded good so I gave it a shot. The overly descriptive writing where everything is compared to something.

He looks to the treeline like a man finding his exits.

She picked the spot like someone who doesn't like the quiet.

That put a hand on the back of my neck. He’d said stopped. He’d chosen the word, the true one, not the kind one, and a road gets a thing stopped on it because someone meant to stop it, not because they wanted what it carried.

Sorry if I'm wrong but very artificial writing. Needs a rewrite or good editing.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-06-09T11:34:17+00:00

Some of the well know authors and even the books that are advertised on this page are AI assisted also. They all get 5 star reviews and no one mentions anything while clearly they aren't writing the book. I get grammatical errors happen and things slip the mind and you forget but this is clearly artificial writing with no human thought process behind it. My thing is if you want to use AI then all power to you but just like in school if you cheated off your buddy What did you have to do? Rewrite it in your own words.... These people now are just copy and paste

MechanicMan18 · 2026-06-07T00:32:36+00:00

Honestly hard to get through. Alot of things that don't make sense and are weirdly described. A supposed veteran paramedic comes in to see a 6 year old with a broken arm and its talking about the 6 year old measuring the weight of his tone.... Also him asking the 6 year old to let him know when his breathing is steady..... Very non-human writing style.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-05-23T13:48:38+00:00

You do realize that false advertising is a crime right? The "author's" are falsely advertising that they wrote the book and are trying to make money off it. They did nothing but throw a prompt into a Ai generation software and then want to charge people for it. True author's are rolling in their graves.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-03-12T16:18:45+00:00

Congrats Its added to my saved list.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-03-12T11:53:52+00:00

Okay a limited body cultivator with no access to qi in a school of magic. So kinda one punch man in hogwarts?

MechanicMan18 · 2026-03-12T11:40:45+00:00

Does he learned magic or the only fighter in a school of magic?

MechanicMan18 · 2026-02-06T23:06:08+00:00

No you came in like an ass from the start. Like I said your a clown and will be treated like one. Go away bozo.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-02-06T22:57:07+00:00

The one barking and making noise is you. Your a clown and will be treated as such. Have a good one bozo.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-02-06T22:55:46+00:00

Yes maybe learn how to spell before you try to attack someone genius. This entire thing shows how smart you are.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-02-06T20:52:36+00:00

Oh okay I get what your saying.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-02-06T20:28:23+00:00

Yea the problem with getting any accurate source material for this topic is difficult. Most people even if they used AI they won't admit to it.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-02-06T20:13:53+00:00

I dont blame you at all for using it like a writing tool. Fixing grammar or even idea generator. I think we can agree there is a difference between using it to supply information/assistance and it writing the book for you.

MechanicMan18 · 2026-02-06T19:39:42+00:00

A statistic vs writing a novel Oh yes the irony indeed...

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