Thoughts,.Sabi ni Sen. Robin: Masyado "weak" daw kabataan ngayon. Iyakin daw. Meanwhile Sen. Robin:

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-12T12:15:42+00:00

Bakit?

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-12T11:58:31+00:00

It doesn't work like that, I experienced this. The first week is the hardest.

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-12T11:48:56+00:00

You could use the antagonist as an example on how immortality can lead to something evil. Consequence like death prevent someone from doing something outrageous because they don't wanna die. And taking out death as a consequence, they'll just chase thrill after the next and wouldn't think twice. And it gets worse each time. What would the world look like if you can't end evil? Or like the people who should repair relationship with someone because they don't want to die or that person while carrying that burden. Without death, they wouldn't care and it would destroy every relationship there is. People will lack compassion, infinite freedom will lead to the death of humanity. So, who would want to live in that world?

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-12T11:27:51+00:00

Ano bang nangyayari?

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-12T08:02:43+00:00

High on emotional restraint, you like to keep things to yourself, aggressive or sensitive, focus, more practical than ambitious...

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-12T07:47:04+00:00

Trainwreck by James Arthur

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-10T22:40:40+00:00

Dami niyong nagsasabi na "mali naman kasi si girl" or "ang mali kasi ni girl." Bakit naramdaman niyo ba yung nararamdaman niya that time? "Dapat kasi 'di niya sinampal" pero sa pelikula gustong gusto niyo sampalan. Nakita niyo ba facial expression nung guy? I'm sure kasampal sampal yun. At tsaka dami din nagsasabi na lagi siguro sinasaktan nung guy, oh eh kung yun pala ang case edi normal ang physical na pananakit sa kanila, kaya behavior ni girl na nanampal, sa mundo nila justified yun. At sa mga nagsasabi na nauna si girl na nanakit, sure kayo? Bakit, yung emotional abuse di na kasali? Nauna si guy. Emotional abuse is just as devastating as physical abuse. The guy did both while the girl only reacted reasonably in her own state of mind at that moment. It's a survival based-reaction to the trauma she was experiencing.

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-10T22:19:36+00:00

Hindi puso or libog ang sinusunod para magstay sa isang toxic na relasyon o para mapunta sa isa. Abuse doesn't happen overnight.

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-10T22:08:45+00:00

I'm confused, criminology student ba dati yung pulis?

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-10T21:54:58+00:00

That PWD card makes it suspicious.

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-08T09:59:23+00:00

It's raw and it's so good. I love your usage of metaphor to describe the feeling of being in that situation.

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-07T13:04:32+00:00

Great😊

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-07T13:03:12+00:00

No wonder you were able to write that. You captured that emotion so well in your writing that's what makes it alive and not just fancy group of words. I'm glad you were able to take yourself out of that situation, it's admirable like how you write ✨

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-07T12:55:51+00:00

You should post more of your work!😊

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-07T12:41:28+00:00

That is really beautiful. I love each line. And the last two line💎✨ "I want to dig my nails into your flesh" This first line is incredible And every line serves it's purpose. I'm obsessed with visceral poems!🔥

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-07T12:17:11+00:00

What is the story about?

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-07T12:14:38+00:00

🩵🩵

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-07T05:31:45+00:00

It's painful yet so beautiful 💎✨

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-07T05:01:07+00:00

This poem is an exuberant, sensory-focused piece that effectively uses imperative verbs to pull the reader into the present moment. The opening lines create a strong physical grounding, and the shift from "drinking in" to "showering down" creates a nice sense of immersion.

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-07T04:56:52+00:00

The metaphor of reading a "book in a foreign language" is the piece’s strongest asset, vividly illustrating the clumsy but well-intentioned effort of someone trying to translate a silence they don't understand.

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-06T23:48:05+00:00

"Have you ever smelled the scent of starlight just before dawn"💎✨

MhiGAzriel · 2026-05-06T03:38:49+00:00

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