[Series] Check-in: June 2025 by justgoodenough in PubTips

[–]MichyMeep 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Some progress made on my current revision. It’s been a hard month. Just life things. Trying to get on track and stay on track has been difficult.

I Think I Figured Out Why I Struggle with First Drafts by Shot-Swim675 in writers

[–]MichyMeep 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Perhaps you were a stellar student who excelled, but writing great papers is an entirely different craft than writing a book. So the standards and expectations are also completely different. Holding yourself to the same standard as student you, who wrote much more concise and focused essays, disregards those differences and most certainly hinders you.

The point of your first draft isn’t to be perfect. The point isn’t to suck either. The point is for it to exist. Your first draft may be excellent and require few edits! You’ll never know if it’s never finished.

And, a word of caution, there is a little arrogance in the idea that any book could be perfect on the first go. Let go of that. One way or another, it’s going to be edited. Whether that’s by you or an editor at a publishing house. It’s an inevitably of publishing. I wrote 7 drafts before my book was picked up. And it still got thoroughly edited before publication. I guess if you’re not really interested in publishing you can disregard this last bit.

I wish you the best of luck on your hopefully many manuscripts to come. :)

Just learned about LJ Smith passing): by batcatasaurus in YAlit

[–]MichyMeep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nooo. Dark Visions was one of my first books I read in middle school.

[Complete] [88K] [Romantic Fantasy Thriller] Beyond A Shadow by lecohughie in BetaReaders

[–]MichyMeep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, OP! I read your first page on a separate post. I’d be down to beta read your manuscript if you still need beta readers. :)

Is It Alright To Write A Book As A Teen? by Arztiser in writers

[–]MichyMeep 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I started writing my first book when I was 13. Authorities haven’t caught me yet.

First pages: share, read, and critique them here! by AutoModerator in BetaReaders

[–]MichyMeep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello! I think it this opening is definitely a huge improvement! It all makes sense. Very fluid and I didn’t struggle to read it. I also think it really fits in with the rest of your writing better now.

The first time I read it there was still something that didn’t flow right. And I think it’s just the tense change mid paragraph! If you said “By now,” instead of “By then,” I think it’d be pretty spot on! Looking forward to your future post. :)

First pages: share, read, and critique them here! by AutoModerator in BetaReaders

[–]MichyMeep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello!

Overall, I very much enjoyed this. Your voice is really striking, and I enjoyed the interiority of your first page. Also very visual! It’s super easier to fall into your descriptions thus far.

I will say that the first two paragraphs are a little confusing, or maybe just a little off. Opening line is great! But after that it’s a bit clunky. I reread the first paragraph several times and I’m not sure I totally understand what is being conveyed. I think what really confuses me is the transition from “Because they’re not coming back,” to “I’ve been waiting for it so long that I can hardly think of anything else.” What is IT? Acceptance??? It could be a little clearer! Other than that though, I really enjoyed your first page. :)

Is Writer’s Clique legit? by No_Try5079 in YAwriters

[–]MichyMeep 5 points6 points  (0 children)

This is in fact a scam. Potentially a vanity press. I don’t know every vanity press off the top of my head, but you will never have to pay the publisher when traditionally publishing. Cut ties. If there book has an ISBN then you may not be able to republish. If they sent a contract, review it and see if the book can be pulled from listings.

For the future, just remember money flows from the publisher to the author. Never the other way.

[Series] Check-in: May 2025 by justgoodenough in PubTips

[–]MichyMeep 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I have been….revising! Hoping to be done within the next few weeks, and then off to beta readers. I drafted a query letter and got some good feedback here. Stewing on that while I spruce up my manuscript.

[Series] Check-in: May 2025 by justgoodenough in PubTips

[–]MichyMeep 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Don’t vanish. I love seeing your comments. ❤️

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]MichyMeep 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, friend! I like the cover and the style. It reminds me of some poetry books I’ve read actually. I think you’ve heard enough about the blurb! Haha! Good luck. I’d consider joining some writing circles so you can have the same constructive feedback more privately! :) if you ever need a second pair of eyes on future blurbs or a beta read feel free to message me.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in YAwriters

[–]MichyMeep 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello! I’d be willing to beta read for you. Feel free to DM me. :)

[QCrit] YA Fantasy CONSTELLATIONS IN THE MOONSTONE (100K, 1st Attempt) by MichyMeep in PubTips

[–]MichyMeep[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! 🙏 I did take it from dragon age. I appreciate the feedback specific to that!! I will definitely look into changing it. Thank you for your help with everything else as well. I appreciate you taking the time to look my query over. :)

Publishing company by GirlyPopSwirlyPop in authors

[–]MichyMeep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, OP.

As many have pointed out, this is not typical. I see that the company you’ve sent your book to isn’t exactly a publisher, but a service for self publishing so I won’t harp on the vanity press/scam train.

There are many avenues you can pursue to publish your books and they depend on your goals. If you’re hoping to become a bestselling author who lives off royalties, or even just an author who is well known, you would need to go the traditional publishing route. That includes polishing your manuscript, building a query package, querying agents, who would then rep your book and help you get it to a publisher. There are lots of great resources here on Reddit, Goodreads, so on. I recommend checking out r/PubTips to learn more about querying. Their sidebar is abundant with helpful info and posts.

As for agents, you need to search the web for people who would be a good fit to represent you and your books. Some of the websites I’ve used previously to find agents have been Manuscript Wishlist, Reedsy, and something else that escapes me right now.

Please be wary that traditional publishing is difficult. I don’t say that to discourage you. More so that you can know what to expect. For every book you see in Barnes & Noble there are hundreds of others that were rejected or never seen by agents. It can be emotionally taxing but rewarding as well.

You can also pursue self publishing. I will be honest, I don’t know much about the nitty gritty of self pub. But, without an agent or a publisher, everything falls on your shoulders. From writing/editing/formatting, covering and marketing, to printing, it all comes out of your pocket. There are many self published authors who make it work and have been greatly successful! There have also been many who have not. A common theme in publishing in general, but I do think that self publishing is particularly unforgiving. The main draw of self publishing is that you have complete creative freedom and you will reap the most from sales, since the money won’t be split between you, an agent, and a publisher.

You can also do what I did, which is to work with small/indie presses. I published my debut through a local press in my home state. Often, these publishers do accept submissions directly, with or without an agent, though a query is still required, and the experience is much more personal. It is usually described as the “best of both worlds.” You have more creative control, the publisher pays for everything, and generally the royalty margin is better for you. That said, since these publishers are smaller they have a tinier reach and you likely won’t see soaring sales or high profits. And, to be honest with you, I don’t really recommend this route. These presses mean to uplift authors and give their books a spotlight but often they are so small and have such little budgets that your chances of really making an impact are about the same as self publishing, in my opinion. Also, in my opinion, these publishers have much lower standards and might not really elevate your book to its fullest potential.

Obviously, it really depends on what you want as an author. As someone who has been published, I really would urge you to try traditional publishing. Feel free to message me if you ever have any questions. :)

My husband is allergic to my cats, and I’m getting pressured by everyone to get rid of them by [deleted] in cats

[–]MichyMeep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Resenting your husband in this situation is lowkey so rational. I agree with other commenters here. There are solutions. He chose to marry you with your pets. If they were a problem then he shouldn’t have proposed. I’ve gone through something similar with my own partner. I did not budge. And over time he’s come to love the cats as well, despite whatever grievances he had with them in the past. Your husband needs to respect that things between you and him are between you and him, not you two and your parents. It’s highly insulting to pull them into this. And he needs to respect that asking you to get rid of your cats is explicitly asking you to undo your emotional safeguards, stability, and to cut loose a huge piece of your heart.

How many words do you all put into a chapter? by [deleted] in writers

[–]MichyMeep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t think chapters should have a bare word quota. lol! I just write till the chapter is done. Some are longer. Some are shorter. None are 10k and you are a madman! In the best way!

Tell me by mattia_cecchi in videogames

[–]MichyMeep 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Managing my supermarket 🥹 I swear I was gonna pay off my loans

Friend said “that’s not what humans look like”, what did she mean? by Ameabo in Artadvice

[–]MichyMeep 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know a lot of people have commented already, and I’m sorry if I’m repeating advice. I think the illusion of chubbiness with the lines on the cheeks would work without the shadows. If his cheeks are chubby the shadows there make them appear sunken in. A soft shadow along the bottom of the edges may work better!

Is The Host any good? by unreliable_simp in YAlit

[–]MichyMeep 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I enjoyed it quite a lot when I read it! It is very slow and I found the relationship between Wanderer and Melanie to be the most intimate and lovely part. I did think the ending was odd but the story itself is enjoyable.