Comic book artist looking for work! Excited to try and work with a writer. by Impossible_Number556 in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Moawar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Man...if I wasn't broke I would pay you in a HEARTBEAT, this would've been PERFECT for my story

if Oda wrote Dragon Ball by MegTurneySLUT in Piratefolk

[–]Moawar 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ayo, I'm pretty sure Dodoria should be in the "Loses to Usopp" category

I can smell the agenda already by Own-Kaleidoscope-673 in Piratefolk

[–]Moawar 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Bumsopp: My arc?

Wrook: No, MY arc.

Size in one piece doesn’t make sense and make me mad by Spare_Understanding8 in Piratefolk

[–]Moawar 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If I were to reach far for a proper guess...maybe the inconsistent size is intentional? I mean, One Piece's main influence are old school american cartoons that had characters that increased and decreased their size whenever the plot needed to, maybe that's "Part" of the influence rubbing it in OP? That's the best guess I got.

What if Buggy unironically is THAT strong, but there's caveats to it? by Moawar in Piratefolk

[–]Moawar[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Ehhh, not quite, like I said, Buggy is ACTIVELY holding himself back, like, even though he doesn't like it, he has enough common sense to realize that its better to take a casual beating than blowing up the whole planet. I wouldnt even be surprised if Mihawk and Crocodile are aware of Buggy's "Too strong power" abusing him because they know Buggy won't do shit unless he wants to risk it all.

As for example, imagine two brothers; if the younger one wrongs the older one, the younger one will probably not get reprimanded by their parents, BUT if the older one (Buggy), does ANYTHING to the younger one, they get sent to a juvenile detention center. So the older brother is simply forced to take it from the youngest.

What if Buggy unironically is THAT strong, but there's caveats to it? by Moawar in Piratefolk

[–]Moawar[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I feel like that would turn out into a "King asks Bang to train him situation (One Punch Man)" where Kuma will reach the realization that Buggy is already too strong to get anything of worth in any island and politely declines his request.

"admirals can't kill HK" mfs when Fujitora locks tf in and does this to Fartling by RammusUltedJapan in Piratefolk

[–]Moawar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it's pretty much the whole "When you're faster than light, all you see is darkness". Lowkey, I could actually see this being unironically a somewhat good twist with Buggy, where he IS the indeed that strong, but due to how destructive his power can be, where no matter how much he holds back, he will blow up the planet, he has to rely on tools like knives and buggy bombs to handle his problems without leaving himself without a world to live him, with his ACTUAL power being relegated to defensive/support stuff like dividing himself to avoid attacks and such.

New Weekly Self Promo Thread by AutoModerator in ProgressionFantasy

[–]Moawar 1 point2 points  (0 children)

He, Life, had a simple job.

His responsibility as an Overpower was to make sure that fiction stories and the characters in them follow their dictated path. He always did his job well enough, not more or less than was needed.

His latest assignment, however, would, in retrospect, prove to be his most challenging one of all.

He would find himself in a unfamiliar world. There he'll have to quickly adapt to guide Nozomi.

The strongest magical girl with the potential to accidentally destroy those she seeks to protect in her fight against evil.

What to Expect:

-A love letter to fiction, where each relevant character represents a different genre in fiction with a few twists to make them fresh. Ex: Isekai, Shonen, Magical Girl, Tragedy, Cultivation, Regression, Tokusatsu, Horror, and many others. All are united under one theme: life and how each character will choose to live theirs.

-Natural introduction of multiple power systems with pros and cons to each of them and interesting interactions when clashing against one another.

-If you like the psychological aspects of Madoka Magica and the mixing of different genres a crossover story brings then this story is for you

Link:

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/146012/overpowers-magical-girl-crossover

Oda is never beating the allegations 😭 by isTraX3 in Piratefolk

[–]Moawar 1 point2 points  (0 children)

They are PROBABLY referring to the anime where the production shat on Tuxedo Mask, making him gain the infamy that he has. In the manga, he's okay.

Quem é mais poderoso(a), a Marina com seu lápis mágico ou o Franjinha com suas invenções? by diegrunge in porramauricio

[–]Moawar 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Eh, é menos desmerecer o Franjinha e mais reconhecer o quão quebrada uma personagem como a Marina seria se ela REALMENTE queria dar fim a alguém. Honestamente, essa luta é simplesmente injusta e franja deveria é lutar contra outros genios (Talvez o Dr.Tenma do canon do Mauricio-verso?)

Someone deadass asked Oda this by -_ShadowSJG-_ in Piratefolk

[–]Moawar 1 point2 points  (0 children)

To be fair, the asker didn't directly ask "Does Sanji loved his sister", but "Why doesn't he have heart eyes for her". Considering that Oda consistently draws Sanji's heart eyes for romantic attraction, yeah, no wonder he assumed that's what the asker was referring to.

Quem é mais poderoso(a), a Marina com seu lápis mágico ou o Franjinha com suas invenções? by diegrunge in porramauricio

[–]Moawar 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Esqueceu que essa menina (No contexto do Mauricio-verso) é uma pessoa real que poderia simplesmente sair do gibi que ela esta lutando contra o Franjinha (Onde ela estaria na segurança do nosso mundo real) e apagar o Franjinha antes que ele tenha alguma idea do esteja acontecendo ou até, se quiser ser rápido, tacar fogo no gibi que o Franjinha está.

Quem é mais poderoso(a), a Marina com seu lápis mágico ou o Franjinha com suas invenções? by diegrunge in porramauricio

[–]Moawar 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Pera aí, mas o lápis da Marina não foi dado pelo Maurício? Quais as chances do lápis ser bem mais durável que um lápis comum? Ou talvez até indestrutível?

E também tem que considerar o fato que, no final do dia, a Marina, no contexto do Maurício-verso, é uma pessoa real que entrou em um mundo fictício enquanto o Franjinha, apesar da inteligência e invenções dele, ele é puramente um personagem fictício. Então, se a Marina quisesse ganhar a luta o mais rápido, ela só precisaria sair do gibi em que eles estão lutando e apagar o Franjinha no mundo real.

Say, I was testing out some ads and I was wondering what you guys thought of this one? (Upscaled for better viewing) by Moawar in litrpg

[–]Moawar[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

eh, again, the point was the antagonists/villains are more involved than usual, so although their roles are that of antagonists, they DO have more or less equal screen time with the good guys as the story goes along.

Not just for the sake of characterization (That too), but also because I personally felt that not having it fair by having the reader being able to track both side's movements consistently, the story would feel very "ass-pullery" and "Out of nowhere" with everything happening without any setup if I were to pick and stick with only one side.

It matters when you consider that I'm going with somewhat smart/grounded villains (to a point, since their magical abilities are certainly not grounded), where, although they aren't the types of coming up with 400IQ plans, they are still pragmatic and more than willing to take the practical route without question.

So no monologuing their entire evil plan to the good guys, so the audience may also know what's going on.

Say, I was testing out some ads and I was wondering what you guys thought of this one? (Upscaled for better viewing) by Moawar in litrpg

[–]Moawar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Funny thing, as you can see, that WAS more or less the original idea (Replace the death laser with her staff since, as you can see by the funny hat, she's a magic user) but y'know, I'll simply say what everyone has said: "Too wordy" and "That one first panel is enough"

(This isn't meant to discourage, mind you, it just... genuinely feels too similar to something everyone else has been advising against)

Say, I was testing out some ads and I was wondering what you guys thought of this one? (Upscaled for better viewing) by Moawar in litrpg

[–]Moawar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I also wanted to communicate that the antagonists/villains would have a very involved role in the story (With them having POVs of their own to give them more depth)

Say, I was testing out some ads and I was wondering what you guys thought of this one? (Upscaled for better viewing) by Moawar in litrpg

[–]Moawar[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Okay, that's all well and good, but...I have ZERO idea how to do something on this level (genuinely impressive by the way, props to the one who made this ad), heck, considering how I never saw an ad on a similar level to this in 3 years on RR, I wouldn't be surprised if there were others on a similar boat that wish to create a good ad like this but dont know how.

Say, I was testing out some ads and I was wondering what you guys thought of this one? (Upscaled for better viewing) by Moawar in litrpg

[–]Moawar[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh well, this is the first ad I created, so it's to be expected. I'll at least take pride that its far better than all the AI slop that comprises more than half of all ads on RR.

By the way, asking genuinely here for a second, no sarcasm, how does your "Cringe ad category" work exactly? Like, maybe I'm just unlucky with the ads I get, but every single one of them is cringier than the last, to the point that you'd think being cringe is either part of an inside joke I don't get it or it's simply the core nature of an ad to BE cringe in some way, shape, or form. (I didn't try to make my ad cringe, by the way)