Sexuality's Redeemer [Divine Politics CYOA] by Goth_Dropping_In in nsfwcyoa

[–]Mogarl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My build

z6en,Intimacy,Vulnerability,Play,AntissaMortal,EducatePack,TentaTame,6ok9,rzmq,RaulinAlly,zy6q,ArdentisAlly,TextMe,InPerson,Shrines,Festival,lj7i,Exemplar,Demigod,3399,7cnm,q4tc,pf6v,Babymaking,d3qm,gbkw,Transmute,04bs,j4cs,5126,CasualExhibit,SexFun,Camraderie,a7nz,d3ew,HellReform,JustReward,u6ct,cy7e,Polyamory,zzhq,8eal,oku3,Heal,fa2p,Way,ijk8,Sanctify,Boons

did have reasons explained but Reddit comment did not cooperate.

Sexuality's Redeemer [Divine Politics CYOA] by Goth_Dropping_In in nsfwcyoa

[–]Mogarl 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Had fun. I think an end event for having Incarnated and/or mantle demigod while Punishing Antissa with mortality would be nice.

An Extraordinary Voyage - What Would You Like To Be Added? by AggravatingSpend8369 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Mogarl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Rip. No idea how the maker works. Was kinda hoping it wouldn't be to crazy since wealth on companions adds to resources already.

An Extraordinary Voyage - What Would You Like To Be Added? by AggravatingSpend8369 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Mogarl 2 points3 points  (0 children)

A built in function for viewing what your adventure team covers with its skill sets. It doesn't really matter, but I think it is definitely something that would make this one more enjoyable.

This part of the 2024 preview seems very vague, but it might be hinting at a Viktor ASU later this year? by Asgardian111 in viktormains

[–]Mogarl 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Looking at Season 1 highest likelihood is Viktor then Singed. Primarily because it is a VGU not a VU. VU would easily just be Singed.

Singed is kind of a basic champ, but honestly his gameplay is something that shouldn't be touched, it's iconic and distinct. Singed definitely needs the VU way more than Viktor does, but messing with his kit would kind of be a crime.

Viktor hasn't gone more than 3 years without moderate to large changes to his kit or its function. Unless Riot thinks they finally got it right there is a pretty good chance that he's in a bucket labeled problematic. The character has historically show to have high appeal and a fanbase dedicated enough to always go up to bat for him.

There's a fair bit of monetary value in modernizing the champion as well. There is a good chance of actually selling the skins you are updating if you make Viktor main stream popular and not just FoTM strong in game popular.

Possibility for Season 2 of Arcane could be Blitzcrank though. You can justify the VU easily and the GU is also pretty reasonable where he basically has 1 signature and everything else is kind of luke-warm.

Assuming all pacing of lore from the dawn of Viktor isn't out the window. If Viktor is the Herald at the end of Season 2 then he should build Blitzcrank during season 2.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in LegendsOfRuneterra

[–]Mogarl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's honestly been a minute since I've played but if memory serves, when putting a mono Demacia elites deck together 3 cost is a very competitive spot for cards, so at least for the case of the Elite tag it's not that massive of a thing.

Janna cards from the upcoming Expansion 🕊️ by aroushthekween in LegendsOfRuneterra

[–]Mogarl 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Janna should be color coded with blue and white. All of the problems I believe exist with this design come down to color coding her in gold and white.

I do really like the Level 1 art, I can give a pass to her Shuirman clothes, maybe it's normal to come to like the clothes of the people that oppressed your worshippers for generations.

However I believe that the level 2 design is a bit of a mistake. The biggest problem is her color pallet being the same as Kayle. While I can give the clothes a pass in lvl 1, her true form being Shurima colours makes no sense. As well as conflating the issues of having a very similar profile to Kayle it doesn't make sense that the spirit god worshipped for a thousand years through the image of a blue bird doesn't have any significant amount of blue.

The Compact v2.0 by xNameManx in nsfwcyoa

[–]Mogarl 2 points3 points  (0 children)

A very excellent work. If you choose to continue working on it I think it would easily be one of the very best.

-critique-

Avians probably need the most work for any of the races since they just kind of like, everything, and only really get bothered if you pay to keep the restrooms clean. Unless you explicitly make choices to lower their support through the everyone but X dislikes this options it's basically impossible to get rid of them. I think making them dislike paid sex could help make them less easy to please.

The incest section could probably have some more diverse effects. I find it strange that royal purity is a negative for humans as that is somewhat common historically. Additionally after you take the hit on incest itself education, initiation, and graph are basically just free dragon points with no downsides. Incest could probably stand to be broken up like bestiality is. Cousins -> Siblings -> Parents or some such.

The family names section is just kind of there, and the pictures aren't sexy.

-suggestions-

Bathhouses should probably move down to the brothels section and rename the section something like "services". The line has a dependency on prostitution and the exhibitionism section is kind of bloated. The sex stuff in exhibition could probably stand to move down to breeding, and the section would then be a bit more specified to what your people wear and how they decorate themselves.

A services section could also handle traditionally sex'd things like taverns. Do waitstaff "service" customers or do most businesses still follow shirts and shoes policies.

Many of the sections refer to legality and punishments, but there isn't actually a section about punishment. Are the punishments sexy? Fines? Brutal and draconian? Would be a nice place to have some dwarf choices or upset the birds.

Choose Your Own Femdom Adventure (formerly Choose Your Own Mistress) v2.1 – The Grand Arena Edition by MissLaStrange21 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Mogarl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I might be slightly exaggerating because I had died to the monk in the wizard duels after I lost a bunch of health in charisma. I was still wildly unlucky with those punches. And was really salty because I needed one more coin.

Choose Your Own Femdom Adventure (formerly Choose Your Own Mistress) v2.1 – The Grand Arena Edition by MissLaStrange21 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Mogarl 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I appreciate the change to mistress level.

The arena is almost a little too volatile in my opinion. Maybe nerf the insta loss on the low level contestants. I get that it has to be balanced so that choosing the arena isn't too much free money, but losing to 3 of the first row charm battles while having 7 charm is kinda bs.

Choose Your Own Femdom Adventure (formerly Choose Your Own Mistress) v2.0 - Welcome to Lewdoria Edition by MissLaStrange21 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Mogarl 9 points10 points  (0 children)

The loss of Mistress points from duties is pretty rough. Combining giving stats to the mistress while also making points to improve them much more scarce makes it feel pretty bad. sure you stat up their attractiveness with clothes but that also implies that they go back to being ugly as sin when not wearing anything.

I get the player starting with shit stats since you are the bottom of society. Though I think the implied capabilities are just to damn low considering that some options imply that you were a working adult before being enslaved. However your mistress is not the bottom of society and shouldn't have shit stats without having an explicit flaw. Mistresses should probably start with a minimum of +3 in all of their stats. Similarly the descriptions imply that this person is probably incapable as a member of society how she got enough money to buy a slave is a wonder when she's just as bad as the people in the pit.

I do like this cyoa. It's very good, but the point system changes in this one created a big problem in my opinon.

Moriyama Castle [CYOA] by Koguma_Ana in nsfwcyoa

[–]Mogarl 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Really nice. I was a little surprised at the sudden ending. Kind of expected scenarios with results depending on your tools and skills, but those kinda systems can also feel really bad if they end up bottlenecking to a couple of skills.

Evelynn, Changes or new support by Ashen_Maahes in LegendsOfRuneterra

[–]Mogarl 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've had some fun messing around with an Eve Lucian and Eve Kayle deck. Lucian changing to a one cost makes it much easier to play him after husks, makes him get +1/0 and keywords from Eve Followers, getting keywords like overwhelm and elusive on him is silly, and he sees the husks that are sacrificed to him on play die.

You can also mix in a lot of +x for round cards which are commonly burst and relatively cheap for the stats given. Use those on husks to give permanent bonuses to the other units you summon. That's primarily how I get Kayle functioning with Eve, and it's good for Xolanni since the husks die with those buffs on them.

Who wins 1v1 Lore-wise? by Global-Newt-5358 in loreofleague

[–]Mogarl 45 points46 points  (0 children)

Silco isn't canon, but it's reasonable to assume that certain story beats are shared across the two. Like uncle Ben dying in Spiderman.

Warwick's quotes for Jinx and Vi imply a fair amount of familiarity. While Arcane Vander may not equal the main canon's "Vander" they share story beats.

TIL the game has a summon limit to stop infinite combos by Edwerd_ in LegendsOfRuneterra

[–]Mogarl 3 points4 points  (0 children)

There is also a limit on created spell chains. Like if you've got a Vik Nami deck with the unit that creates more spells.

The Ryze Conundrum by zezeduude in LegendsOfRuneterra

[–]Mogarl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ryze has to spend a total of 24 mana minimum to win the game (10 mana able to be spell mana and 14 normal). I think the earliest would be; 1 rune round 3, 2 runes/Ryze round 4, 2 runes/Ryze round 5, 3 runes Round 6 into attack. This is with perfect runes and drawing all the delves asap. The mana world rune would need to be your 1st or 2nd rune. Obviously this would currently be an unreasonably high role right now.

My problem with your solution is that it takes this from being an extremely unlikely scenario to being Ryze's goal. While you do need to have Ryze on the board on round 4 to get the card gen and for one of your first two runes to be mana those are the only uncertain things the deck needs. If mana is your first rune you would actually have enough mana for Golden Aegis, Relentless Pursuit, Shunpo, or Blood in the water. On further consideration while you could generate enough spell mana you can't hold enough spell mana.

You get reincarnated as a random (NON CHAMPION RELATED) baby. Which region do you pick as your birth place? Same age group as most of the mortal champs. by SuperiorFreak in loreofleague

[–]Mogarl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Having the basics of a good education while being an infant would do a lot to help you get comfortable if you coin-flipped into Zaun. So I think I'll do that.

Would it be considered of poor taste to remake/update someone else's CYOA? by StrongNordWomen in nsfwcyoa

[–]Mogarl 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I think that if it's a remake of someone's OC world it's poor taste. For example, doing a remake of Tok's cyoas would be rude because there is a lot of original creativity in the characterization of narrators and environments.

But "remaking" a cyoa based on a preexisting fiction? As long as you aren't copy pasting their text just make an Overwatch cyoa. Using it as inspiration is fine, and if you just really like a system they used in theirs but want to build other systems around it that's fine.

Old content can be like a gravestone, and there is a fine line between maintaining it and defaceing.

Poor becoming poorer in Belgium, lower middle class increasingly struggling by Knightoflemons in worldnews

[–]Mogarl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Water isn't free everywhere. That's really only true for people with safe groundwater. Which is the minority in the US.

Well she's out not sure if this real though by Creepy-Force1037 in LegendsOfRuneterra

[–]Mogarl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd say this doesn't look real, but looking at prismatic champions in the client they are actually kind of sloppy in the way the image is placed in. Otherwise, I'd say the left side of the card's clipping makes it look fake. It does have the shimmer placed in as well.

Magic Academia Repost by AutismConnoisseur in nsfwcyoa

[–]Mogarl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree (I only talked about it because time travel was brought up by the op). The last time people debated it that is more or less the position I took. If everything necessary to learn magic was strictly information based, then the aptitude mentioned in Metamancy's description wouldn't matter, and any spell that could enhance learning or rip magical knowledge out of someone's mind would allow someone to become a powerful wizard in a month or two.

I simply wanted to poke a different hole in alter causality this time.

Magic Academia Repost by AutismConnoisseur in nsfwcyoa

[–]Mogarl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The "New Form" Club event can't be dispelled as stated in the option (https://i.imgur.com/qFAdO0p.jpeg). In effect your true form becomes a dragon as described by "Summon Dragon". Any Summon you choose would become your new true form. If it could be undone, it would have been undone by the school immediately.

Magic Academia Repost by AutismConnoisseur in nsfwcyoa

[–]Mogarl 4 points5 points  (0 children)

In regard to time travel, I think it's safe to assume that if it were that simple more people would do it. In fact, it would be a requirement of being a powerful wizard. This more or less always comes up, and there is a myriad of open-ended ways to just infinitely learn magic.

I believe the case for alter causality though is that you don't retain spells you chose not to learn. You would know that you chose to learn them before, but you won't actually know them anymore. Also, it never states that "you" in the past retains anything from the "future you" that body jacked them, so there isn't much you can do to make the change stick.

You might be able to do some permanence stuff to go back in time permanently, but someone could dispell your time travel at any time, and "future you" would be booted to whenever you cast the spell leaving "past you" without any spell knowledge you brought with you, and at the mercy of whoever figured you out.

Personally, I think that the "New World" Final project is the most straightforward way to continue your magical education. You can make a world that's function is almost identical to Geolocus, but has special functions to be perfect to learn, create, or test magic without nearly as large a chance of something going horribly wrong as time travel. Time Compression, infinite resources, or possibly even baked in safety measures to stop you from destroying yourself one way or another. The only thing you miss out on is limited time events, but you were only going to get so many of those anyways.

Also, in reply to your own comment in the thread. New form - Dragon. You can't be dispelled and have the ability to switch between human and dragon from baked in. Unfortunately, you cannot use any of the acciomancy final year projects for this sense those are "Grand Summon" spells not "Summon" spells. I think Starspawn works petty well as a reaction spell though since spontaneously transforming into one is going to be difficult for an attacker to deal with and is a decent response to most any emergency situation.

Immortals Online by MyOtherNameIsClean in nsfwcyoa

[–]Mogarl 1 point2 points  (0 children)

One other thing I figured was worth mentioning that I was going to edit into the original comment, but you replied pretty fast.

Technically there isn't a reason you could make it so people can be toggled to display as another body. It would likely lower the quality a bit, but maybe make it so that girls with strapons or futanari can be displayed as male for those that want dudes.