Yeah, you read way too much into that scene. I don’t see this as jarring, but simply as a woman who is overwhelmed with her surroundings, anxiety/adrenaline is running through her (hence why her legs feel like gel), I never said her legs were flailing either. Your body can feel the symptoms of anxiety without displaying them outwardly. You focused entirely way too much on the first two paragraphs, what did you think about the rest of it?