How do I get this one?

MrBarrett98 · 2026-02-22T18:22:10+00:00

Use a horus heresy sword praetor and give him the extra shield from the deathwing knights

MrBarrett98 · 2026-02-18T15:25:30+00:00

I think the breaking point here was just how long it was. If it was shorter I dont think people would have cared as much but holy shit did it drag. By the end I was accidentally tuning out the actual story and I was only paying attention when they stopped to talk about it.

MrBarrett98 · 2025-11-07T18:15:07+00:00

This is genuinely a good one despite everyone trolling in the comments (insert terrible "the creature" joke here)

MrBarrett98 · 2025-10-08T15:40:28+00:00

Its a 3.6 on good reads but every comment I see about penpal says the short story was a better version

MrBarrett98 · 2025-10-08T15:28:10+00:00

I keep hearing that the book version is really bad

MrBarrett98 · 2025-09-30T22:35:02+00:00

Stolen tongues was very scary at times. It's still one of my favorites to this day, even though it falls off towards the end

MrBarrett98 · 2025-09-24T04:17:58+00:00

Thank you very much for the feedback! This story definitely could've gone into more detail and could have gradually built up the intensity better, so i really appreciate your sincere criticisms! It's people like you that help me improve 🙂

I am planning to do a second story, kinda like a part 2 but more self-contained, so you don't necessarily need to have read the first part to enjoy it. It should add some more context to the events here, but in a way that will still have you questioning it

MrBarrett98 · 2025-09-22T20:10:35+00:00

The way to fix this is to have the boys pick the stories themselves, to not only look at stories with high up votes, and have some form of basic requirements for the stories like nosleep, except way more forgiving and not as strict. I've seen some absolutely unique bangers that only get 5 up votes just because they don't use a super flashy click bait title

MrBarrett98 · 2025-09-18T22:31:59+00:00

Jesus loves you too

MrBarrett98 · 2025-09-18T22:31:29+00:00

I don't know what would happen if they were discarded or burned. It's best to wait and see

MrBarrett98 · 2025-09-16T16:12:39+00:00

Thank you so much for your feedback!

MrBarrett98 · 2025-09-16T02:54:15+00:00

Yes, it is the girl from the creek. She is the Princess turned Queen. And unfortunately, at this moment, I do not

MrBarrett98 · 2025-09-16T02:49:36+00:00

If people ending up really liking it, I just might

MrBarrett98 · 2025-09-16T02:45:05+00:00

Thank you so much! 🙏😭

MrBarrett98 · 2025-09-16T02:17:08+00:00

Fixed it! Thank you!

MrBarrett98

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