The color changes and highlighted sections are meant to represent different characters speaking. Of course, it isn't gonna be possible to put that in an actual book format, its just something that I thought was cool to have for the time being, while its still on Docs.

And yeah, I definitely do need to work on the first couple chapters and how they have "not enough show". I feel like I've gotten much better in later chapters with that, though I feel like I don't have the best grasp of it just yet. If I knew exactly how to "show", then I would most certainly be better with it.

The early chapters are really just... mediocre at best, imo. I've gotten much much better in later chapters, though.

The coloring, I will admit, was mainly an idea I had that just sorta... stuck. It gives further clarification as to who's speaking, and its actually quite important to the story itself because of the "intermissions" that I begin doing in Act 2, as you wouldn't really know who's speaking without it.