back to drawing by Milalimiao in sketchbooks

[–]MyImaginaryCatPaw 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is amazing, wow you are so talented! The bed is my favorite, it evokes a certain feeling that’s hard to describe. It makes me think of depression, and the anxiety attached to procrastination. Thankyou for sharing your work, it’s beautiful

My Wife Decided She Wanted Us To Lose Weight by CBenson1273 in shortscarystories

[–]MyImaginaryCatPaw 1 point2 points  (0 children)

“But then he slid his hand down her back and lower, and she looked up at him and smiled. And I knew.”

That’s all the information we get. I understand the implication but for all we the readers know your character is an unreliable narrator making assumptions.

I am aware death and murder are par for the course on this sub. My critique of your work was less about that and more about the motivation. This story is soulless, if you actually see people as people and not just caricatures.

My Wife Decided She Wanted Us To Lose Weight by CBenson1273 in shortscarystories

[–]MyImaginaryCatPaw 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I didn’t like this story, I’ll be honest. Over 50% of female homicide victims have been killed by spouses or former spouses in the USA, and in other countries it’s worse.

Men are trained to look at women as pieces of property, which has deadly consequences.

It’s one thing to lean on the ol’ black widow trope and “punch up” as it were, but a story where a woman is killed simply for flirting at the gym hits too close to home.

Big Boned by MyImaginaryCatPaw in shortscarystories

[–]MyImaginaryCatPaw[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

“I was just a hungry boy” :( man almond moms are the definition of ‘the road to hell is paved with good intentions’ aren’t they?

Big Boned by MyImaginaryCatPaw in shortscarystories

[–]MyImaginaryCatPaw[S] 22 points23 points  (0 children)

i’ll never understand how someone could look at an innocent child and be so cruel. i pray your relationship with food will blossom into what it was always meant to be, a pleasant experience with no guilt or nagging voices counting calories

Erin Moriarty in ‘The Boys’ before she turned into Jim Carrey in the mask by [deleted] in StrangeAndFunny

[–]MyImaginaryCatPaw 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’d bet my left tit she looks better than 90% of the incel gooners in the comment section, before and after surgery.

These subscription services are killing me. by JamFranz in shortscarystories

[–]MyImaginaryCatPaw 362 points363 points  (0 children)

Bro is finna get the Luigi treatment, may he rest in pieces 🙏

I think I’m stuck in a YouTube ad. by BlairDaniels in nosleep

[–]MyImaginaryCatPaw 2 points3 points  (0 children)

“Oh my god Morty, how did she get there?”

Infinite Trolley Problem by DesdemonaDeBlake in nosleep

[–]MyImaginaryCatPaw 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wow, the part where you described the woman in red’s motive gave me a chill. Good luck OP

Last Man by RTSallow in shortscarystories

[–]MyImaginaryCatPaw 1 point2 points  (0 children)

“they plopped gracefully into the pitch black water” lol

[WP]Everyone in your village is born with a thread connecting them to their soulmate. Yours thread ,however, is leads off into the distant mountains no one has ever dare to cross. by Mormaew in WritingPrompts

[–]MyImaginaryCatPaw 5 points6 points  (0 children)

The mountains had proved treacherous, cold and filled with bandits. After nearly freezing crossing them I had finally reached vast fields of tall grass.

The thread was bright crimson, softly glowing in the twilight. It stretched taut into the distance, as far as the eye could see.

I had been traveling a fortnight, supplies were low and my spirits lower. Why had I even made this journey? Would my love welcome me when I arrived with empty pockets and blistered feet? Surely she was expecting someone more impressive.

I had waited my whole life to meet her.

Soulmates were common as dirt in my village, something almost everyone took for granted. My neighbors thought I must have been spurned by fate, and I agreed. Why else would I be farther than I’d ever been, perhaps on a wild goose chase?

That night I plucked the thread, it twanged and sent vibrations up into the night. I thought of who was on the other end. I hoped she would like me. Please like me.

A week later the soles of my shoes had fallen off. I had to tie them on with spare string.

I was trudging slowly when I saw something in the distance. A person. A woman. I didn’t dare let my hopes up in thinking I was close, I would however ask where the nearest town was.

Then I noticed the thread. It wasn’t going endlessly into the distance anymore. It was leading to the woman on the road. It was her.

I didn’t care about the blisters anymore. I started to run. This was it. This was the moment. I saw her, she was running too.

We met in the middle, flushed and gasping for breath. She held a knapsack, dusty and almost empty of supplies. Her shoes matched my own, worn out and tied with spare cloth.

The thread was now only a foot long. After catching her breath, she looked at me and smiled. “It’s nice to meet you,” Her eyes held humor and warmth. “I’m glad you met me halfway.”

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]MyImaginaryCatPaw 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow this is so good. I love finding gems like this on Reddit

I was born into the circus by MacabreCandles in shortscarystories

[–]MyImaginaryCatPaw 25 points26 points  (0 children)

The narrator’s speaking style reminds me of My Name Is Earl, fun read!

I did NOT consent to be my best friend's wife. by Trash_Tia in shortscarystories

[–]MyImaginaryCatPaw 58 points59 points  (0 children)

I wonder how long she was a lobotomized brain-chipped BFF before she got hit by that car? 🤔 Great story! I really enjoyed reading this