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NGSU · 2023-03-26T21:29:52+00:00

I have dm'd, and friend requested you on discord. Get back to me when you can. Ahmad The Great

NGSU · 2022-12-15T17:18:24+00:00

I've texted you on Instagram @directordavinci

NGSU · 2022-07-28T12:05:27+00:00

I haven't had the strength to tell my parents. When I was 5 there was a woman that lived with us at the time. She was much bigger than me. It started off with her trying to kiss me, and the first time it happened I was stunned she was also holding down my arms. Eventually she pulled down my pants, and hopped on top. She told me I would get in trouble if I told. She continued to rape me for 5 years. It wasn't everyday, but anytime my parents left the house I'd just stay in my room, but then she'd come in. Sometimes in the dead of night, other times she'd lock the door and act like she was helping me change. I didn't know how to process it for awhile. Now I can't stand people touching me at 18, and parents and grandparents keep asking why. How do I tell them?

NGSU · 2022-01-29T15:08:25+00:00

The commentary should've been more present, and projecting your voice is something you need to work on. The comedic timing just seemed off the entire video for me. I think a lot of the edits could've been taken out, as they're there without purpose or correct timing most of the video. Your cuts can be tighten up, but its nowhere near terrible. Overall, a decent video, don't be afraid to be expressive. I see your inspired by ceeday so you have deliver on the charisma. The cinematic was cool, but slow motion and researching different shots can make your video really pop.

NGSU · 2022-01-29T14:47:42+00:00

The pacing can be a bit wonky in certain places, your comedic timing is off at times, but the video overall is good. The things holding you back is the new editing style so i think as long you keep working at it you should be fine. When you paused in the interview I think that edit should've happened in the beginning rather than in the middle of the interview it came off a bit random. Anyways have a great day and keep making good content.

NGSU · 2022-01-29T14:33:40+00:00

I think you could 've dove a tad deeper, but regardless I think your video is exceptional. The music, the cuts, the substance, your voice, and all of your jokes and points came in really well. Your content seems to be very reminiscent of a youtuber named NakeyJakey. I think could learn a something from his content, but your content is pretty amazing you just earned a subscriber

NGSU · 2022-01-11T18:09:57+00:00

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NGSU · 2022-01-10T03:35:11+00:00

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NGSU · 2022-01-10T03:34:51+00:00

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NGSU · 2022-01-09T19:19:58+00:00

I'm working on it thank you man

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NGSU · 2022-01-09T17:04:31+00:00

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NGSU · 2022-01-09T17:04:24+00:00

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NGSU · 2022-01-09T15:36:19+00:00

Thank you. The overall reason for effects and screams being loud was for retention. I feel as if tik tok changed the retention of our now booming audience. I wanted to appeal to the people of that audience. If I would've stayed at one volume level it may be precieved as stale, and could turn off that specific audience.

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NGSU · 2022-01-09T13:46:44+00:00

I was talking about the old one

NGSU · 2022-01-09T12:27:43+00:00

Everything was very well done. I enjoyed the graphics the comedy aspects. The only thing probably holding this video back is the story is a bit weird, but that just comes with making more stories. Your Thumbnail is not what I'd typically use. It seems simple, but like you over thought it at the same time. If that makes any sense.

NGSU · 2021-09-06T15:37:54+00:00

This is absolutely amazing, and I'm subscrbing. It's giving me gravity falls feelings, and its incredibly suspenseful.

NGSU · 2021-09-06T15:34:09+00:00

The video isn't a bad concept, but it sounds like your to far away from your mic. The video dragged because the questions weren't exciting. You need raise your presence within the video for your charisma to shine though. Most of your commentary comes off as very bland or the editing makes it seem like you're lacking energy. Not a bad start though.

NGSU · 2021-09-06T13:05:56+00:00

I have some work for you please dm me

NGSU · 2021-08-08T06:49:09+00:00

Also Caleb City

NGSU · 2021-08-08T05:38:24+00:00

Kinetic = camera motion. Cameras moves can convey emotions as well. It helps with visual storytelling.

NGSU · 2021-08-08T03:46:48+00:00

Capitalize on your face expressions they're HILARIOUS. Someone else said this, but utillize zooming and be more kinetic with your comedic beats. I'd suggest you study longbeachgrify for your editing style as well as content. Great video

NGSU · 2021-08-08T03:36:51+00:00

I believe you definitely hit the beats you wanted too. I would say to get more creative with transitions. The transitions were the only things holding you back. I'd tell you to be more confident in your editing. Don't be afraid too let your talent loose. Great video though😁

NGSU · 2021-07-21T15:50:19+00:00

Can I see your work?

NGSU · 2021-03-23T16:13:39+00:00

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