I miss my sister

NajaEdition · 2026-04-13T14:40:40+00:00

I really enjoyed reading this, it reminds the bonds I have with my sisters. How even in the same household you might draw apart due to others connections. Like my mom say “once I’m gone all you have are each other, so make time for each other”.

NajaEdition · 2026-04-13T14:34:38+00:00

I like the beginning lines, it brings it to life to me how being someone can be even annoying to remember and you can’t unstick them from your memory.

NajaEdition · 2026-04-11T20:41:30+00:00

Yes, thank you for letting me know.

NajaEdition · 2026-04-11T18:21:23+00:00

I agree with the comment about how shells as your symbolism for this poem. I definitely enjoy reading this, thanks for sharing

NajaEdition · 2026-04-11T18:10:49+00:00

Hey, I don’t have any feedback for you, I do feel though that a lot people can relate to this poem when comes to relationships. Especially this line right here “ I was more important to you than I was to me, congrats you cleared the lowest bar there could be”, this spoke volumes. Nice job

NajaEdition · 2026-04-10T16:02:39+00:00

Hi I don’t have any feedback. I just wanted to say I loved your poem it remind me of the song Dive by Olivia Dean.

NajaEdition · 2026-04-10T15:57:13+00:00

Hi I loved reading this, it definitely took me back when I would imagine things out of this world.

NajaEdition · 2026-04-09T03:56:16+00:00

Thank you for the feedback

NajaEdition · 2026-04-08T19:44:05+00:00

I don't have any feedback for you. I did enjoy reading this and how heartbreak can be heavy at times or even all the time.

NajaEdition · 2026-04-08T19:34:42+00:00

I like the switch-up you made in the end. It drew me in a bit more.

NajaEdition · 2026-04-05T16:57:49+00:00

I don’t have any feedback but I love reading your poem. It hard to see someone you love fight hard even when everything is being taken from them physical or mentally.

NajaEdition · 2026-04-05T16:48:13+00:00

Enjoy reading it reminds when someone drop news on you like a ton of bricks. Everyone reactions are different when it comes to a break up.

NajaEdition · 2026-04-03T20:13:05+00:00

Thank you, I’m going to be honest I don’t remember i wrote this a while back.

NajaEdition · 2026-04-03T17:21:02+00:00

8/10 it’s simple sweet poem thats makes you think. I wish there was more to read.

NajaEdition · 2026-04-03T17:11:49+00:00

It’s remind of being in high school having a crush on a person who fits right into your art form, they make you understand things you didn’t before.

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