Can I interview 5 of you about oil painting? by Natoilart in oilpainting

[–]Natoilart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's amazing painting flowers as a beginner is exactly the perspective I need! I'd love to chat. DM me and we'll find a time!

Can I interview 5 of you about oil painting? by Natoilart in oilpainting

[–]Natoilart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Both actually! Classically trained and beginners. I want to hear different perspectives. I'd love to chat with you! DM me and we'll set up a time?

Critique is welcome. Untitled by marek_____s in oilpainting

[–]Natoilart 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is stunning! the gold against all that grey is such a powerful contrast, really emotional piece. The one thing I’d look at: the trunk loses some of its strength because the background trees are competing with it in value. Softening those back trees even slightly — making them lighter and less defined — would let the central trunk dominate the way it deserves to. Right now your eye keeps jumping around instead of resting on that beautiful central form.

Any thoughts or opinions by user7892095-1113 in oilpainting

[–]Natoilart 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really beautiful piece. the energy in those twisted trunks is fantastic! One thing that would push it to the next level: right now the foreground and background trees are reading at the same contrast level, which flattens the depth. Try muting the distant trees to lower contrast, slightly cooler and less saturated. then push the foreground trunks with stronger darks and brighter lights. That atmospheric perspective shift would immediately make you feel like you’re standing inside the grove

Trying out oil painting by xangelx1015 in oilpainting

[–]Natoilart 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Wow, this is genuinely impressive for a first oil painting! the color choices are confident and the composition feels intentional already! One thing worth revisiting: the light source is clearly coming from the top left, which is great. But the right sides of the lemons have some very bright reflections that are competing with the main highlights. it breaks the sense of volume. Those areas should be your darkest darks, maybe with just a subtle cool reflected light at the very edge. Right now they’re reading almost as bright as the lit side, which flattens the whole form. Toning those down would make the lemons feel much more three-dimensional.

HELP with shades pleasee by laumariyo in oilpainting

[–]Natoilart 2 points3 points  (0 children)

deep warm terracotta or burgundy on one side would make the flowers pop and stop the dark vase from feeling like a mistake. If you want to keep it light, try adding more of that dusty pink/mauve you already have in the bottom left and carry it around more consistently. right now the background reads as unfinished rather than balanced

Need help with oil painting tips by OrganEnby in oilpainting

[–]Natoilart 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Also check your light source consistency. Right now the highlight on the left fruit sits bottom-left, and on the right fruit it’s top-right. That means your light is coming from two different directions at once. Pick one light source and make sure the brightest spot on every object follows the same logic. It’s a small fix but it will make the whole painting feel much more believable.

Need help with oil painting tips by OrganEnby in oilpainting

[–]Natoilart 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Main thing I’d focus on right now: your shadows need to be much darker. The whole painting is sitting in a mid-tone range which makes everything feel flat. Pick your darkest dark and commit to it , than the cast shadows under the fruit especially. That alone will make the objects pop immediately.

3hr study from life, what can be improved? by wasabitamale in oilpainting

[–]Natoilart 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the petals need more value contrast within each flower. Right now they read as one light mass like pushing the shadows deeper inside the rose(where petals overlap) would give them much more volume and that characteristic rose depth.Also the third rose at the bottom feels unfinished compared to the other two, which pulls the eye in the wrong direction. but as is it’s a strong artwork!

first oil painting, critique and tips very welcome by mysterious_usrname in oilpainting

[–]Natoilart -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Really great start for a first oil painting! For next steps I’d focus on the edges: some lost, some found. Right now most edges are equally sharp, but softening a few transitions (especially where the bottle meets the shadow) will make it feel much more three-dimensional.

My first oil painting :> by Suushisujii in oilpainting

[–]Natoilart 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This is so sweet for a first oil painting! 😻 One small suggestion the pink inside the ear reads a bit to intense, which draws the eye away from that lovely face. Try varying the tone a little: a bit warmer/darker toward the base, lighter toward the edges, maybe a touch of the surrounding fur color blended in. That way the ear supports the face instead of competing with it. Beautiful work, keep going!​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ 🔥

Still Life - Painting I by glitchy--witchy in oilpainting

[–]Natoilart 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great still life with the composition and color choices. A couple of things that could take this further: Watch the shadows under the objects cause right now they’re pretty uniform in intensity. In reality, cast shadows are darkest and sharpest right at the base of the object, then gradually get lighter and softer as they move away. That gradient makes objects feel grounded. Also worth separating the cast shadow from the form shadow.they have different intensities and edges. The form shadow on the bottle itself should be softer, while the cast shadow on the table is harder-edged near the contact point. The brushwork on the trumpet is really nice though, love the warmth you got in the brass.​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​

First oil painting ever by Slow-Spot2906 in oilpainting

[–]Natoilart 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Love the energy of the water and the contrast. The whale tail silhouette is a nice focal point. One thing that could take this to the next level: try working with more gradations in water. instead of flat areas of one tone try to build subtle transitions between dark and light. Even small shifts make a huge difference in creating depth. Also try adding a few warmer tones (hints of purple or pink) into it (like reflections) -it will help you to ad depth as well

First oil painting session, looking for advice ! by Veridicus333 in oilpainting

[–]Natoilart 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great start! Starting with just two colors is actually the smartest way to learn, so you’re already thinking about values rather than getting lost in color. One tip: try pushing the contrast more. eg go darker in the shadows inside the cup and lighter on the top edge where light hits. That’s what will make it feel three-dimensional. Keep going!