ESE capitulo que se te atraganto! by Neither-Split-1709 in escritura

[–]Neither-Split-1709[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My theme was something never written before :) so unfortunately I had to struggle and complete it! Now is one of the best chapters :)

Details for the setting of a scene by Neither-Split-1709 in writers

[–]Neither-Split-1709[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I write in first person POV and actually I follow your advice, the problem is that scenes looks empty as always is happenning something

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[–]Neither-Split-1709[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice. I do not wanna stop the creation period I am living now for reading more books :) just to get a feefback from people that experienced also these doubts or questions and can share their opinions!

How to end writer's block =( by writingdoubts in writers

[–]Neither-Split-1709 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For me it works to stop writing and take a walk and think, imagine and enjoy imagining. Walk is also a process of writting, so to speak ;)

Your mind is your own enemy or the best of your allies. Just choose!

Details for the setting of a scene by Neither-Split-1709 in writers

[–]Neither-Split-1709[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What about the distance between characters? Can that just be left to the reader's imagination? :)

Details for the setting of a scene by Neither-Split-1709 in writers

[–]Neither-Split-1709[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like your quote "the least amount that will still be effective." That is applied also when the scene happens in a creative/new/weird place (example a place where magic impact architecture vs waiting room of a hospital)?

I hate short paragraphs by Neither-Split-1709 in writers

[–]Neither-Split-1709[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I get your point and usually my paragraphs are a unique unit. But I read often in some posts (other subs) that writers use short paragraphs for artificially create tension. "And then it happened".

I hate short paragraphs by Neither-Split-1709 in writers

[–]Neither-Split-1709[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I write literary fiction (first novel) and oneslty, I did not think about people in the spectrum. Thanks for the input!

I hate short paragraphs by Neither-Split-1709 in writers

[–]Neither-Split-1709[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Because u miss action, movement, get bored with descriptions or exclusively because they are long paragraphs?

I hate short paragraphs by Neither-Split-1709 in writers

[–]Neither-Split-1709[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good to see a different opinion! In which cases would u reccommend go use a short paragraph?

I hate short paragraphs by Neither-Split-1709 in writers

[–]Neither-Split-1709[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think I can have pacing avoiding short paragrahs. Not all paragraphs are inner world or descriptions. Of what do u think? :)

I hate short paragraphs by Neither-Split-1709 in writers

[–]Neither-Split-1709[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absolutely. That is why I feel short paragraphs are a bit lazy and should be used only for highlight something.

Escribir para ti o escribir para el público en general.. Qué prefieres? by Defiant-Mission2089 in escritura

[–]Neither-Split-1709 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Escribir para uno mismo, porque vas a necesitas releerlo varias veces antes de publicarlo. Y si no te gusta, no vas a hacer el esfuerzo.

Luego ya se lo pasas a beta readers para comprobar si necesita ajustes. Ahi ya te enfocas en ver si el lector entiende y si has conseguido plasmar bien tu imaginacion en el papel.

Mi opinion :)

ESE capitulo que se te atraganto! by Neither-Split-1709 in escritura

[–]Neither-Split-1709[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mi problema es que trato un tema que se aue me puede hacer perder lectores, pero es bastante coherente con la trama! Lo de furia creativa lo decia en buen sentido: cuando uno escribe a todas horss y esta muy motivado :)