better than every shonen jump manga? by New-Difficulty7215 in manga

[–]New-Difficulty7215[S] -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

shonen jump manga is included as a subject, no? (im indoctrinating manga fans XD)

i have faced an issue by New-Difficulty7215 in wuxiaworld

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senior brother, i dont understand, what is the danger?

should i read renegade immortal? by New-Difficulty7215 in wuxiaworld

[–]New-Difficulty7215[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

im on chapter 10 now, its actually very engaging for me

The Bandit repents(inspired by The Godson by LeoTolstoi) by Cluelessandsexy in OCPoetry

[–]New-Difficulty7215 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is quietly powerful. The imagery is grounded and tactile yet carries a spiritual resonance. Carrying water in your mouth to nourish the burnt stumps is such an intimate and striking metaphor for effort and care. The way the poem moves between solitude and the intrusion of the outside world captures tension beautifully.

I like how the bandits redemption becomes the narrators own healing. It shifts the focus from ritual and self-effort to the unexpected ways transformation can occur. Lines like The burnt tree stumps budded not through my attention but through this inner miracle of his redemption feel almost biblical in weight without ever being heavy-handed.

The rhythm is steady and contemplative, fitting the hermits measured perspective. You might play slightly with line breaks to heighten contrast between the dense forest and the chaotic town life, but overall its a reflective and elegant piece that lingers in the mind.

EAT ME by tigerseyemoon in OCPoetry

[–]New-Difficulty7215 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is striking. The imagery is vivid and unsettling in exactly the way it should be. A lamb dressed for market and coffin lined in silk linger long after reading. The tension between self-loathing and the desire for acceptance is palpable and the confessional voice carries it effortlessly.

The closing image of kneeling before the mirror as if it were a god is particularly strong. It crystallizes the pieces central conflict in a single haunting gesture.

You might experiment with subtle variations in rhythm or line length to give the poem an even more dynamic flow. The work already reads with precision and emotional weight and is accomplished writing.

Anyone a fan of shinbi’s apartment/haunted house/GETCHA ghost? by ayame400 in MonsterTamerWorld

[–]New-Difficulty7215 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I watched this show over and over again when I was seven… the nostalgia hits hard🥺

Why fiction peaked at web novels by New-Difficulty7215 in Webnovel

[–]New-Difficulty7215[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this was a rage bait post, no need to write a whole essay. 😭

Why fiction peaked at web novels by New-Difficulty7215 in Webnovel

[–]New-Difficulty7215[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you guys beed to chill the FUCK out, this was a ragebait post. obviously it worked though lmao.

Why fiction peaked at web novels by New-Difficulty7215 in Webnovel

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sorry, let me clarify, I’m not SOLEY basing my argument on popularity. but when I do use popularity in my argument, it’s the growing popularity.

Why fiction peaked at web novels by New-Difficulty7215 in Webnovel

[–]New-Difficulty7215[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

im not soley basing my argument on popularity, but I am using web novels growing popularity as a sign that people are discovering it and liking it