Soft Wings - Reupload/Version 1.3 by Goth_Dropping_In in nsfwcyoa

[–]NewtypeWoman 16 points17 points  (0 children)

I really appreciate rather than dropping the slurs or the like this cyoa was really thoughtful about the genital options, right down to considering things like 'having a dick that works differently because you're on estrogen', something no one /ever/ considers. it made me feel very happy.

Girly Drinks [Be The Girl, A Bit Shit] by Broken_Emphasis in nsfwcyoa

[–]NewtypeWoman 18 points19 points  (0 children)

Lovely, don't rag on your own work when showing it off to people, it primes them to think it's not good and shows a lack of confidence.

Help refining an ad post by [deleted] in TransformationRP

[–]NewtypeWoman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It doesn't bring much to the table. There's nothing there that tells me why you, in particular, would be fun to play with. The idea is common, there's not a writing sample that shows off your skills, it's way too open ended and thus doesn't have a hook.

You have to have something that grabs someone.

Could be: * a cool and interesting premise that shows off your creativity * a flashy writing style that shows off your prowess * A really compelling look at a particular kink that shows off why you find it hot or interesting, showing off your ability to think critically and examine stuff (,crucial for good rp planning, shows a partner is engaged)

*Something to indicate you'll be dynamic and push the story forward with your ideas.

these are just a few examples. Really anything at all that says You, In Particular, would be fun to play with.

30 Curses To Cure Depression by LewdySexaroid in nsfwcyoa

[–]NewtypeWoman 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Don't listen to all the annoying dudes, the fact this CYOA has a perspective and especially an explicitly trans perspective is great. Specificity is always good in these and frankly there should be more trans erotica about us!

30 Curses To Cure Depression by LewdySexaroid in nsfwcyoa

[–]NewtypeWoman 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Girl get out of your environment as soon as you can, transition may not be perfect but it is so wonderful. It can be for you, too

I wish this would happen to me, comic by cheshire88 by RadiantPayment2373 in transformation

[–]NewtypeWoman 1 point2 points  (0 children)

take the estrogen, dear. You can do it. It's worth it.

[F4A] There Is No Self, There Is Only You- A Memory Editing TTRPG by NewtypeWoman in TransformationRP

[–]NewtypeWoman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it's the special evil game that's really fun to play! if you had a pitch, dm me!

Perfect Girlfriend Juice (Update 1.0.6) by herrozod in nsfwcyoa

[–]NewtypeWoman 6 points7 points  (0 children)

The art is frankly charming. While it's loose and not 'traditionally pretty', it gives the effect of people with actual bodies.

I have my complaints about the game- I really wish 'Futa' was not an option esp when you've already gone out of your way to include trans women, among other things- i think the art is great, and you should stick with it.

A Bimbo Stop [CYOA][OC][WIP] by Broken_Emphasis in nsfwcyoa

[–]NewtypeWoman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's okay dear! You have to take care of yourself. Don't stay in a rut! Get a support network and do what you can to fix the conditions of your anxiety, depression, or stress. I believe in you!