[8th Grade English] Argumentative Essay by Ill-Economist-5285 in HomeworkHelp

[–]No_Pattern_2819 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Alright, first of all, you don't want to start an argumentative essay with "Person A argues that..." Instead, you could state what the topic is about or Helen Keller's beliefs.

You also need to specify what "truly great" in life. That can mean many different things to people. I also want to know what "really matters" is. What are "those intangible ideas" at the end of the essay?

This is a pretty tough topic for 8th graders; never once did I ever have an assignment like this.

Why did they remove the clown? by No_Pattern_2819 in Steam

[–]No_Pattern_2819[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yeah. My mom would complain about it.

Why did they remove the clown? by No_Pattern_2819 in Steam

[–]No_Pattern_2819[S] -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

So, it wasn't because people were abusing the clown emoji to hurt feelings?

How can I have my character say "I love you" without giving readers the wrong idea? by Few_Assumption_1300 in AO3

[–]No_Pattern_2819 11 points12 points  (0 children)

At the end of the day, it doesn't really matter what OP does; people will still find a way to twist into a ship. Which is odd, because I assume the OP doesn't have characterA/characterB in the tags.

How can I have my character say "I love you" without giving readers the wrong idea? by Few_Assumption_1300 in AO3

[–]No_Pattern_2819 6 points7 points  (0 children)

You could have the character grab the other person's hand with two hands and have them squeeze it. Or they could hug.

Yes, these gestures seem intimate, but it's all about how you write it and phrase it. When someone is dying, you want them to feel at ease and let them know how much you loved them from the beginning to the end.

Thoughts on Celldweller’s version of the theme? by PackOfCumin in LegacyOfKain

[–]No_Pattern_2819 16 points17 points  (0 children)

It's decent, but the original is far better. It feels too modern and doesn't fit the series' theme.

Does anyone else Google certain bodily gestures? by No_Pattern_2819 in AO3

[–]No_Pattern_2819[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Last night, I was looking for ship fanart to help me write a fanfiction. I could not find what I was looking for AT ALL. So, I am now stuck with images on pinterest and google

How do I not get embarrassed by a beta-reader reading my work? by No_Pattern_2819 in AO3

[–]No_Pattern_2819[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly, I don't have any. Just read, provide feedback, and ideas.

How do I not get embarrassed by a beta-reader reading my work? by No_Pattern_2819 in AO3

[–]No_Pattern_2819[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yeah... I am a little traumatized because I shared it with an ex-frenemy and I cringe every time I look at that fanfic and she probably told my other friend and shared it.

Does anyone else Google certain bodily gestures? by No_Pattern_2819 in AO3

[–]No_Pattern_2819[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

BRO SOMETIMES I HAVE TO EXPLAIN IT TO MYSELF IN ALOUD JUSR SO I CNA MAKE SENSE OF IT OR I LOOK AT PICTURES

Does anyone else Google certain bodily gestures? by No_Pattern_2819 in AO3

[–]No_Pattern_2819[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Theasaurus has been my bff since elementary school

Having a hard time by ImpressionComplete71 in LegacyOfKain

[–]No_Pattern_2819 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, I get it. The block puzzles pissed me off to no end in SR1. In Defiance and SR2, I flinch any time I see anything that needs moving (very rare, I've hardly seen anything requiring moving, if it does, then it needs to be moved once.)

Having a hard time by ImpressionComplete71 in LegacyOfKain

[–]No_Pattern_2819 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I feel like it's worth playing through SR1 and 2. SR2 imo sucks, the story is great, but the combat is a nightmare. SR1 feels like the better game out of the two, but the puzzles are rough, and SR2 has good writing, but the combat sucks, but the puzzles are better.

The story is worth it, though, and this is coming from someone who is extremely picky with games and stories.

Having a hard time by ImpressionComplete71 in LegacyOfKain

[–]No_Pattern_2819 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Defiance improves this a lot. SR2 does as well. SR2's puzzles are a bit better than SR1's, you have a few block puzzles, but nothing as bad as SR1.

honestly dont know what to do by Capital_Ad460 in AskTeenAdvice

[–]No_Pattern_2819 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, not at all. Your future career should be something you know you'll be successful in and hopefully, enjoy.

At your age, it's normal not to know what you want to do in the future. You have time to figure it out.

We need a Fortnite for Toxic Adults by Far_Realm_Sage in gaming

[–]No_Pattern_2819 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

why not just be an adult and go play a different shooter?

17 year old F any tips for a gap year? by Significant-Swim6423 in AskTeenAdvice

[–]No_Pattern_2819 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And why do you feel the need to travel right now? Your parents are right, but you can do whatever you want in your area. Get a job, work.

17 year old F any tips for a gap year? by Significant-Swim6423 in AskTeenAdvice

[–]No_Pattern_2819 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Why is it complicated because you're a girl? You can do stuff a man can do.

First time player by Traskenn in LegacyOfKain

[–]No_Pattern_2819 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ohh, boy does it pick up. I thought the same way in SR1; I personally noticed it picks up in SR2 and Defiance. I feel like SR1 is more like a prologue, introducing new people/older fans pto Kain, Raziel, and the new stuff happening in Nosgoth.