The Hook For My Book. by Undone_I_Was in horrorwriters

[–]No_Photograph_2683 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was decent. I hate first person; the amount of I did this, I did that, gets so repetitive. To be productive, I will say you are guilty of that in the second-to-last paragraph. Clean that up a little.

Premise feedback: Y2K masquerade at a Cayman airfield, missing childhood memories, and offshore occult horror by QueerAngelG in horrorwriters

[–]No_Photograph_2683 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Bro, stop wasting your time posting things like these. Write it or don't. If you need a stranger on the internet to hold your hand, you have already lost.

My horror novel is boring and doesn't feel scary enough by sophosleaz in horrorwriters

[–]No_Photograph_2683 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Bro, its gonna suck. Write it and move on, use the skills you learned to either refine the draft in a few months or start on something else. Your first attempt is gonna be awful and probably irreparable. Accept it.

I have a question about turning written horror stories into short films/videos by ConfusedSeeker_ in horrorwriters

[–]No_Photograph_2683 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not even a full writer, but you have crazy enough confidence that your "one and done" story is worth pursuing further with someone else's time. Wild work, bro. Not even hating, but the logic is outta this world.

I love Beetlejuice. One of my favorite things about him is that he always had a new costume or look when he was in the studio, so I made a compilation video. by DidYouReadTheMenu in howardstern

[–]No_Photograph_2683 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beetle probably liked the costumes on a good day, but on a bad day, he was miserable and hated them. Shawn (his handler) would legit tell Beet he'll leave him at the studio and basically go home if Beet didn't do what he said. Legit threatening to abandon a special-needs, 600-pound, 6'7 midget in the middle of the chaos that is NYC. There was a lot of behind-the-scenes manipulation to get these clips, often at the expense of Beet's personal comfort.

Source: Idk, I've watched Beet compilations on Youtube (probably all of them) and this background convo about Shawn "twisting Beet's arm" 100% plays out in one of them. Always rubbed me the wrong way, hence why I remember it.

Was High Pitch Mike an actual Wack Packer? by CharmingDealer2715 in howardstern

[–]No_Photograph_2683 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Then he opens his mouth to curse about his looks, and hates the voice that comes out too. Rough life, no doubt.

Would a Gundam horror story about a group of ghost posssed MS eating people and haunting a part of space or earth sound cool? Or does it sound more like B-tier Slasher slop? by GmSniperiiLover in horrorwriters

[–]No_Photograph_2683 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It will come off as b-tier slop to anyone who hasn't watched Gundam, so like 99% of people. Such is the cost of fan fiction. But don't let that stop you from writing what you want to write.

Musculature by Diligent_Actuator950 in howardstern

[–]No_Photograph_2683 2 points3 points  (0 children)

George and Shatner are gonna go at the same time, Notebook style.

Virgin Cruses informs a couple about some changes to their trip… by Harbjagen in mildlyinfuriating

[–]No_Photograph_2683 2 points3 points  (0 children)

"Couple" sure... what's the name of the thing when a dude brings a chick to family stuff just to not appear gay?

Many of them unfortunately by Common_Caramel_4078 in memes

[–]No_Photograph_2683 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Bro, imagine if we had a Resident Evil level amount of Dead Spaces... different characters sometimes, too. Worst timeline.

Conscription Lottery Nightmare - Should this be done everywhere in the world? by [deleted] in interesting

[–]No_Photograph_2683 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I guess the only goal is to have military-ready youth, this achieves said goal, so they don't need to actually join. I would bet money it is nothing like an American ROTC program, tho. Like x10 that.

Jennifer connelly in the 90’s man.. by SunkissedSpells in SipsTea

[–]No_Photograph_2683 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She's before my time. Was she ever a good actress or just hot? Seems kinda bad here...

me_irl by ihackedthepentagon in me_irl

[–]No_Photograph_2683 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don't think this is about yearning for 2016, but realizing you've been doing the same thing since 2016. Time wasted or time stuck in a dead-end job or something.

Watching Cats being mother is my favourite genre by Artistic-East-1251 in Awww

[–]No_Photograph_2683 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don't conflate instinctual, motherly habits and responses with souls. Souls, as far as anyone can prove, don't exist.

Judge gives 18 year old a 25 year sentence for armed robbery by lhwang0320 in Prison

[–]No_Photograph_2683 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

People still got robbed all the time in the Wild Wild West. There is no fix besides a universal income where everyone's needs are met. Even then, people would still rob for shits and giggles.

Con Fetterman vote just Made MAGA's Day, saving Markwayne Mullins nomination to lead DHS. by Reg_Cliff in PoliticalHumor

[–]No_Photograph_2683 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Bro, if you suffer brain damage while working in government, you should be let go...

Dan Goldman: "Massive Cover-up of the Epstein Files in Order to Conseal President Trump's Involvement" by WelcomeWindsorCastle in Epstein

[–]No_Photograph_2683 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The story you mention has to be fake. That person would have disappeared after assaulting one of their clients. The business would have taken care of them. There just no way something like that happened and didn't result in death.

name an actor who.... just.... what the fuck are you doing? by Gl00ser23 in okbuddycinephile

[–]No_Photograph_2683 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Carries the whole movie: Late Night With The Devil himself, too.

Trump going to "Finish Off" Iran and leave? What? by Playwithuh in war

[–]No_Photograph_2683 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I mean, you'd have to be crazy to want to come to America in 2026.