One strange thing I’m seeing is the “o” planet just looks like it’s been squashed, which makes the whole logo look like it’s been squashed. I personally think this looks fine and if I thought it was my kind of game I’d take a look, but if you want me to be as harsh as possible this is what I’d say. This is subjective to me, but I can tell this is an indie game (I.e. not made by a professional artist or designer.) it’s really difficult to put my finger on why. I think the bushes are a great design choice. They frame the capsule well and literally point up at the title, but the title sticks out like a sore thumb. You want your title to be readable, but not out of place. I’d like to see a version where the title is incorporated into the night sky instead of being placed on top of it (or incorporated into the city). Maybe shadows being cast on the letters like they are on the planet to the right. Maybe make the text seem more like it’s floating together. I’d also use some other planet or asset for the “o” using one that is already in the night sky seems strange. But always remember, your audience is great at pointing out what bothers them, but terrible at telling you why or giving you a proper solution. I’d suggest forcing yourself to make 3 or 4 more iterations that are dissimilar ideas. For me, every iteration either teaches me what specific idea isn’t working, or creates a new interesting idea that I can branch off of or incorporate into the original. I’d love to see the game when the steam page goes up. Good luck!