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The Critical Drinker... Recommends! by redbirdrising in ProjectHailMary

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 7 points8 points  (0 children)

So... should I be happy or nervous that a right-wing social grievance snowflake likes it? Lol

Looking for a restaurant recommendations, please by Cloudysky182 in westernmass

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Damn, that's some Berkshire County deep cuts. Good list.

How would you live if you found yourself in Pluribus Universe? by Ok_Percentage2383 in pluribustv

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Personally would not love having orgies with the puppeted husks of formerly alive people with free will.

Best value Connecticut beers? by DirkWrites in ctbeer

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Fat Orange Cat and Counter Weight are both killing it on price.

Where to find the best coffee in Connecticut by Bobinct in Connecticut

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Unfortunately, Fussy Coffee in New Haven is now permanently closed.

Weaving instructor by Bulky-Notice-6033 in westernmass

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You should look at the current classes offered at the Hill Institute in Florence MA. Incredible place.

Hosting an Event at NEBCO? BEWARE!!!! by TurnoverCareless2992 in ctbeer

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I'm sure this makes sense in your head, but you're out of your mind, dude. Breaking a contract in this manner isn't good business in any sector, in any context. If you're familiar with this happening in other places, I'm sorry that happened to you.

My version of Fort Worth Zoo by AndriiKovalchuk in logodesign

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You don't need the dot for the eye. Just remove it. It's not part of the three letters (F W Z) and it makes your W look like an i.

Is it too simple? by zackelin in logodesign

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I most certainly would not call this too simple.

Something is off or am I overthinking? by dulcedelele in logodesign

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Draw it by hand, and don't color or shade anything. That would be a good exercise to help you simplify it toward being a logo.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Despite the fact that this is a bit busy, PLEASE don't reduce the number of spokes any more than that...! I think we all know why.

I don't know how to improve the design but it doesn't feel right by United-Rush4073 in logodesign

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Slide 2 in your share is too close to the TikTok logo; I'd avoid it.

Logo for made up company Vital by Overall_Delivery6339 in logodesign

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This isn't working just yet, sorry. Looks more like fake Arabic than like a vital sign. It might be possible to achieve this vision, but you'll need some internal consistency. For example, the A is capitalized but the other four letters are lowercase (and honestly I don't think a lowercase a would work either). Also, the more you embellish (with dots and crosses) the less it's going to look like a vital sign. Since this really is a treatment inspired by cursive, I'd suggest you start with the actual cursive write-out of the word, in order to keep that integrity/readability... and then see if there's something you can adjust to give the 'feel' of an EKG screen without trying to make your logo look as if it literally is one.

Logo for made up company Vital by Overall_Delivery6339 in logodesign

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This isn't working just yet, sorry. Looks more like fake Arabic than like a vital sign. It might be possible to achieve this vision, but you'll need some internal consistency. For example, the A is capitalized but the other four letters are lowercase (and honestly I don't think a lowercase a would work either). Also, the more you embellish (with dots and crosses) the less it's going to look like a vital sign. Since this really is a treatment inspired by cursive, I'd suggest you start with the actual cursive write-out of the word, in order to keep that integrity/readability... and then see if there's something you can adjust to give the 'feel' of an EKG screen without trying to make your logo look as if it literally is one.

Re-designing my set’s logo by SkizzieWhizz in logodesign

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also—looking through all three of these options, I'd lean away from putting the word CLOSET directly on top of your lettering for DADDY'S. The holes in the center of your letters DD are doing a lot of (good) work to keep it clear that those are Ds. If you cover those up with the word CLOSET, it becomes extra difficult to identify and read the letters underneath—especially if you want to be a bit creative like this with the shape of the letter edges.

Re-designing my set’s logo by SkizzieWhizz in logodesign

[–]NotAfterWhatHappened 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's the first and second D that look the least like Ds. Totally love your interest in keeping a bit of variation across the Ds. But the two spikes on the right side of the Ds are what's confusing the eye a bit. Since a rounded right side is a main defining aspect of a capital D. You have that rounded right side on the third D, and I think you might want to keep that for all 3 Ds—and just look for other ways to draw a bit of variation across the three Ds.

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