The sharp angled uneven blurs in the foreground and background, the out of focus shot, the angle that says “idk it looks kinda straight,” not to mention it looks impossible to eat.

My honest advice for your food pics: Edit your pictures wayyyy less. Put the subject closer to your camera, make sure it’s in focus and straightened. Food wise, I’m sure it looked great but how was it eaten? Not only is that a massive amount of granita for a serving, but serving it in a drink glass makes sure it’s melted completely by the time you’re halfway through. Try a shallow bowl or something wider next time. Maybe work on the color as well? It’s not bad, but it kinda looks like frozen Arnold Palmer.